FIRST! not as good as the other one but still good, the body is a bit too long and thn and the neck look a little squashed, but otherwise, nice job!

It's good,but may I point out a few things?(I'll probabaly sound like an art critic though >.<) the chest is too large compared to the stomache and rib area,the back legs are a bit too skinny and dog-like and the front legs too thick and the neck isn't long enough and a bit and I agree with bronze boy,the neck is a bit squashed.I think that's it,

What's wrong with dog like? I have two dogs so I'm def. influenced by their anatomy ^^ I know there's a lot wrong with this pic but I still like it. The neck might look squashed cuz its supposed to be curved back but I see what u mean

They'res nothing wrong with dog-like ^^; I like this pic too

YAY for DOGS! WOOF, WOOF! *chases tail* I'm glad u critiqued though ^^ there's always room for improvement

i think it is cool i like dogs u should see my drawings they r crap

I'm still influenced by horse anatomy, as I draw them as much as dragons. So, they sort of seep over.....XD

You're deaf Mars???? I didn't know that....! I hope you don't mind, but I have a little criticing. First of all, one of the back legs, looks outa place, and the tail is too thick where it meets the body. The neck should be longer, and the front legs are too thick where they meet the body. Also the belly area where it curves shouldn't be so skinny...

I think he did a good job on this dragon, even if it has paws. what happened to imagination and creativity?

Ferny: it's an abbreviation for definatly

HHAHHAH! silly ferny! i cant believe u thought that! hahah! oh that brightened up my day!

Be quiet Mnementh! *Laughs* Sorry, I didn't know....I'm still laughing at that....

XD @kelsey: Thanks, oh, and me is a girl XD

yeah, only menfolk around here are me and Mnementh. augh! we're being overrun by estragen! (i think i spelled it wrong)

*snickers* There weren't many....err....menfolk I can remember, anyway. Only Talus, Malchios and sometimes Krad. I think. And then there was Silentiea....

Is Ramoth a guy or girl? -Ferny

Girl

I like it. Just because it's a dragon doesn't mean it has to have a long neck. I think its neck looks fine and I love the wings!

It seems this has become a girl's website.teehee.Was Silentiea a guy or a girl?

and other people think that dragons are more in the category of a guy's subject

...that was the thing. No one knew if Silentiea was a guy or a girl. His race was genderless.

then you shouldnt say his race you should say its race, lol,, its not, me and makla are still here... well i think we both are...makla back me up on this!

No, it's proper to call something 'he' if you don't know the gender, as I've said many times now. Calling someone an 'it' is just rude.

That's why when someone asks your dog's name they say, "What's his name?" Aiolos is right!

That bugs me though sometimes cuz then I have to say umm... HER name is shea. Then the rest of the time they say he this, he that, Errr

There's another beagle near my house and everyone's like 'Hey look! It's Brandy! She's so cute!' (the other one is Brandy) and I'm like 'Er, no. HIS name is Nico'. It really is annoying....

Yup. Although "it" is rude also. I prefer kitty or doggy, etc. when referring to pets whose names I don't know. Ex. That kitty's so CUTE!!! XD XD

yup, jus' me an Mnementh as the menfolk representatives. NOT A GIRL'S SITE YET! *triumphant laughter*

it's basically overrun by female influences

maybe not yet...*sits in front of Makla and Mnementh and waves a pendulum in front of their eyes* you are feeling tired...*spins the pendulum*verry tired.When I clap my paws,you will think you're girls...one,two,three...*claps paws**turns to Aiolos* I get that with my dog.There's another black labrodor in my neighbourhood,and it escaped the other day and tromped into someone's house,covered in mud and ate the owner of the house's cat's food and everyone blamed my dog!It's so unfair...poor Ben is always blamed when a fox takes someone's chickens...

;_; aww!

Poor doggy!

He's mah doggie.*hugs Ben and talks to him*yes you are.You're mah little overweight labbydor with big brown eyes...

Adorble drawing, but the dragon seem a bit skinny

*wakes up* oh my gosh, Aiolos your hair is just so cuuuuuuuuuuuute! *giggles extremely girly girl-ish* I'd die for that look! Is it the new line! Oh, you're such a DOLL!! *giggles even more girly girl-ish* (I think... i'm going to throw up)

O.O;

*opens eyes* omg! those clothes you guys, omg, these clothes, where do u get them, i generally go to (sa girl shop, i dunno any), they so suit you girls, you no wot im thinking, MAKEOVER TIME! and then a slumber party! YAY! *makla girl giggle* oh the poor dog, i just love animals, but to hear something like that hehehehehe

O.o;

Oh really? Yeah, I love my clothes too! I generally go to Old Navy and Bealls (spelling? It's kinda sad I don't know how to spell one of my favorite stores XD)! Hehehe!

I usually shop all over the place! It depends on where my mom can afford....... money things have been tight for years........

why is it whenever i go somewere yous lot do such nutty things.And makla do you really think we act like that

I shudder to think how many comments I'll have to go thru when I came back from camping....><

Too many...

YES!*punches the air* My hypnososis worked!

ivfe just decided to reply to the first pages on ht elast comments section then wait till tomorrow when yous lot have posted on the ones ive missed to catch up.Ive got to go to france for two weeks soon i hate to imagine how much i will miss o.0

i may be female but spending hours in a mall looking at pices of cloth to wear just a waste of time! any time someone breaths the word makeover it will take days to find me and i only went to a girls slumber party once (and only because my mom forced me too) *looks at blackhawk as she trys to hipmotize noname* NO No no n..... z z z z z z z z z

i hate going to the mall as well unless im going in game, serendipity, an art shop or waterstones which is this really big bookshop and i mean huge its got two really big floors and its in the shopping mall called bluewater

Meh, I like the mall. Mine's pretty big, but it takes a little bit to get there....But it's got a bunch of cool shops and stuff. And a peircing place <3 *ish getting her ears peirced again* X3

I don't like the mall, but I like this one place, it's called the 'Shorehouse' or something, and has all sorts of cool dragons, lights, fantasy stuff, just really cool stuff basically!

I was gone for eight hours and I missed a bunch of stuff!

me bak! yay! its me!

*squeals* oh my GOSH, Delbin! I, like, haven't seen you here for-EVER! *squealy giggling* we where just talking about how much we love the MALL! (someone stop me! I think i'm going to have an anurism!)

this is so totaly WILD! *dances about* lets go on a shopping spree! yay! in the mall! yay! i totaly like love the mall, its like fantastic! *puts on a pink dress, a blonde wig and some pink sparkly high heels* som1 put my makeup on i an't do it without a mirror (this is sickening)

*rolls on the floor making squeaking noises like laughter* I used to go to a place called Cascades.But only to look at the Dragon shop and in Game.If anyone takes me clothes shopping I normally sulk.

im the same wen i cumes to clothes. i like goin to music, book, and pet stores. and movies ad games too.

same here i hate clothes shopping.XP.And why would we stop yous two makla and mnementh its so funny

*wakes* OMG like were did you get those totialy asium pink high heals! *squeals* MAKEOVER!!! *takes out a mackup bag and starts to put eyeliner and maskara on menmenth* OMG you look like totaly asium! now can somone like do me? ill french brade there hare! and after why dont we play spin the bottle! or truth or dare? (*crys* STOP MEEEEEEE!!!!)

*hides*

Like, guys, this is so totally stupiiiid...I mean, like, do we really soound like thaat? Like, totally, God...*drags out words*

Like, how do you get off, like, talking that way to US? *makes classic disgusted girl sound* so rude. you know, i'm, like, never going to talk to you again!

ok this is getting out of hand this is insult to us girls on this site*grabs makla and mnementh*ok now you are gonna snap out of this or else i will kick you WITH my sisters pointed high heels on, in the only place yous two are most likly still boys

*shoves Makla* I KNOW you didn't just talk to me like that! God! you RETAAARD! (I actually know a girl who's greatest come-backs are 'you retard' or 'you dumbo' XD)

This pieace of line work art is simple but affective . there is a small understanding of muscile placement which will no doubt in my mind get alot better with practice & studies of dogs & winged animals . i like the use of a subtle shadding although some stronger shades will enhance the power shown in the animal . You've made a great start to your animal studies keep up the hard work it'll pay off one day . Advice 1. Dont be afraid of shading a little heavilly as you may find some startling results . 2. keep all sketches from all your studies as they become an important part of development for a tottaly original project .3 . Keep up the good work

*wriggles in Akira's grasp* gag! okay okay! i'm done i'm done! urk! lemmigo!

*lets him drop to the floor*there see it just took a bit of persuasion

*rubs neck ruefully* persuasion? is that what you call brutality nowadays?

^_^

i'll take that as a yes

XD

IS THAT A DOG???????? WITH WINGS???????? i didn't know dogs had wings. its cool. i have a dog.

Its a dragon, just with paws, I already said it was a good drawing, doggy featers or not At least your not as big of a crittic as some of the others. I have drawings of creatures with paws. One, called Tarveka, is a reptile, I added paws rather than clawed fingers because I thought it looked better. Tarveka was biult for speed so she needed a small, rounded type foot rather than long fingers.

I have 2 dogs

it is pretty good

corse it is.

was that sarcasm kelsey

no, what makes you say that? I'm the one defending the doggy paws. I'm not against this drawing at all. I was actually agreeing with colton. i rarely use sarcasm anyway, unless my grandpa's around.

ok just checking

i dont know how u can show ya face ..................how embaressing

*pokes* You talking to me? cuz this pic is from 6 months ago... I guess you have nothing better to do than to bash people, thanks!

Gee, that was quite rude of sk8ta...

if u have nothin nice to say dont SAY anythin at all

thanks guys ^^

your welcome

i like it! ^^ it looks really cool with the paws.

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