3rd.i agreee with both of you its really good hes a good artist but the wings do look a bit out of place

4th.I agree about the wings what..wow!What amazing detail!

lots o detail!

Gr8 picture!!!! It's like a chinese dragon but better.

Fantastic! Would like to see it in color

nice strange position for the head, and I kinda like the wings, but they should be a tad, fuller but over all AMAZING

dude! that pic is frigin awesome it would be better in color

it would be soooo much better if i was in color, but its still the greatest.

wow it's really good i could never draw like that!

WOW!!! This wonderful picture! The details are amazing!

the back leg in the back (oh gee, how redundant) is bent where would be solid bone. either the dragon has jelly legs or a broken bone. the placing of the neck is not entirely clear and it seems to me that it is much too skinny and the shoulder behind it is much too large compaired with the other. there is an odd finger sticking off of the front foreground hand and i can't quite place what it's purpose is. the horns are off-placed, the one on the other side of the head would be growing out of the dragon's eye according to where the eye would be from the tilt of the head and the webbing under the cheek on the opposite side is much too far forward. I like the scale patterning and shading, it is fairly difficult to be patient with each individual scale, skin fold, muscle bulge, etc. but the detail done is marvelous. i love the dragon's expression and the feeling of enjoyable, if a little ungainly, flight.

wuhuhoe! tht guy muts vbe a art critik

hes a talented artist and only tells the truth and offers excellent advice.

wow... toobad hes leaving then

yeah... *starts to cry*

*kicks blazra into a portal and whistles like she didnt do anything*

*whispers to noname* nice one..

cool

noname, that was sweet!

You took out Trowen Makla's least favourite sister.Awesome!

hey! i resent that~!

where did you come from? uh noname.....

And we resent you! (@blazra)

*thinks for a moment and comes up with a weird deduction*... AAAAH! BLAZRA'S CLONING HERSELF!

would you like some of this new chocolate i have recently aquired?

curse you blazra stop cloning yourself and stay in the stupid portals

choccy..*takes Chocolate from E.D* This has better not be the stuff that Aiolos fed me.I had to drink two pints of saltwater to bring that back up.I get to keep my wings though

but... but she was! ugh *throughs her back into the portal and closes it* i hope that holdes her!

that chocolate came from an elusive cocoa plant only found in the Salshet dimension. it gives you super strength (only limited to chocolate lovers). even though i love chocolate, it has no effect on me because i have become immuned to its powers.

*tries to open the packet but fails and resorts to ripping it open with her teeth**gets it open and eats it* ooo superpowers...*suddenly breathes fire* COOL! thanks E.D!

oh oh i want to have some

*acts like a two year old* Mine!*runs away with it* anyways you can already breathe fire..

*drools* ch ch chocolet!!!!!

actually i cast fireballs i have not been able to breathe fire yet i just have to get more of my dragon features ive only just started growing horns*pulls back some of her hair to reveal two very small but sharp points growing out of her head*i havnt even been able to turn into a full dragon yet i dont even know if i ever will though i have imagined what it would look like

Firebreathing is fuuuun! *sets a tree on fire*

funfunfun...*notices noname and flies up in the air* *starts to torch some dry grass fields* Burn baby BURN!! mwahahahah!

*mumbles* i think i just created a monster.... i am kind of afraid to give you some chocoloate, noname, but i will give you a small piece, for you to try, though. *gives noname piece* here you go, Akira! *gives Akira some* yeah, breathing fire's fun! *huge burst of fire comes out of mouth, accidently scorching Blackhawk in the air* SORRY!

*emeditaly her whole body sets on fire and she starts to run around screaming and yelling blody murder and it burns untill she runs to E.D. and shakes her saying* HELLLLLPPPPPP MMMMEEEEEE!!!!! *untill she slumps to the ground and the fire slowly kindles out leaving a motionless body turned black by the flames*

*pokes Noname* Keekee....

*looks at what it did to noname and then looks at the chocolate and eyes it suspiciously but then eats it as if she was drawn to it*i just cant resist chocolate no matter what *suddenly looks a bit queezy and then runs of*i think im gonna be sick*dissapears around the corner*

jerks

*when E.D. checks out noname her eyes open and jumps up* awww man it turned my scales black... *her body sets fire again* but im still a little crazy... *takes a bucket and gives it to akira only to find out it had snakes in it then when shes finished noname takes the bucket and dumps it on aiolo's head then puts Blazara in a bubble full of baboons and pushes her into yet again another portal* keeekeee HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!*starts uncuntrolibly laughing*

*pets snakes* Snaaaakiiees...Me lovers snakeses....

snakes with little bat wings that obey my every command, heehehehehe, they are my minions, my little dragons and i hall rule all the world

*flys back in still looking a little dizzy and queezy* that is some really wierd chocolate i think im holucinating im positive i saw about 200 ninjas around there*falls on floor*but im ok now oo chocolate* goes to take some more of E.Ds chocolate*

GUESS WHAT GUYS IM SENDING IN A PICTURE WOW!! its of a golden dragon from the book im riting

cool cant wait to see it and now back to getting the chocolate

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm chocolate, wot kind r we talking about, milk, white or drk, i fo one love millllllllk mmmmmmmmmm yummmy, but since i am so nice i will give u all chocolate from the lnd of choclate from the smpsos

what sought of chocolate from the simpsons

chocolate rain, and chocolate dogs and chocolate house.. everything u an thijk of can be made of chocolate

If the world was made of chocolate,then Global warming would melt it all

dont worry Blackhawk te wrlds not gonna turn into chocolate Mnementh is lying *finally gets the chocolate of of E.D and eats it then suddenly runs of again*not again

phew.

the world is made of chocolate... fool cant u see that the chocolate world in homers world is real

you are one freaky little person Mnementh

@ mnementh: Yeah and I've been in the Tardis and I killed the whole Dalek army..

hahaha :lol:um by the way i dont think i was hallucinating about the ninjas back there

*gets carried away in her insane ravings*And I'm the next Doctor Who! The BBC got bored with having a bloke as the doctor so when David Tennant regenerates I'll be the next doctor!! XD

... u freaks u nerds i dorks, u believe in shit... BITCHES

Stop swearing or I'll email the Administrators.

oh no dont email the admins... sed in a sarcastic voice

I may not have the power to make you leave,but Tempest and Chalgrish can ban you

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Could you at least attempt to be polite? And good,i'm glad that you hate me.Please just don't take that hatred out on any of the others,because I don't want them involved in our fight.

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......Don't insult my parents.Ever.You can insult me all you want,chav.But don't you DARE insult them.

Blackhawk, i give you permission to eat as much of this chocolate as you want. i seriously don't know what's wrong with Mnementh, but you can knock some sense into her. *looks at Mnementh* IF YOU INSULT ONE OF MY FRIENDS, YOU INSULT ME!!!!! YOU BETTER SHUT YOUR TRAP IF YOU KNOW WHAT'S GOOD FOR YOU!!!!!

Thanks E.D.But you proabaly shouldn't get involved.It might get nasty..

just take the chocolate..... *turns and moves away into the distance*

Oh, don't worry about Mnementh. I sent a report to Tempest and will probably PM Chalgrish on the message boards asking if he'll come and eat this guy for us.

I ment I will PM Chalgrish...not that Tempest will.

hey look Mnemenths posts have been removed yay

evil sods, i dont rely care bout if i insult u e.d and i didnt insult ur parents i insulted u sayng how much no1 cared for u, and dont u dare call me a chav ever, if u ever call me a chav agaiin... u dont wanna no wot ill o to u dirty sod get back to ur shanty

shutup Mnementh nowon here cares about you or your petty and hollow insults you cant do anything to us apart from say stuff to us which isnt true we will never like you especially if you keep on insulting us like this and what are you going to do to us if we call you a chav hunt us down like some deranged perverted freak thayt you probably are

i'll be uor friend but please no swearing

yeah the swearing is pretty bad as well

what do u mean no one cares for me? I'LL LET YOU KNOW I AM LOVED AND ADORED BY MANY!!!!!!!!! damn gikukan.....

GUYS!! give her a break! ive done that once before swearing to get atention or what every she is tryin to acheve and it is hard to control your anger when you have be insulted first and have a lust for revenge or are being ignored or for what ever reason! but... it is also not nice to to insult back mementh nomater how hard it is to control. and also you should axcept her as a friend even if you think she is weard... *staring at akira* hey if you can take me being crazy... then it shouldnt be a prob to axecpt her

dont stare at me she insulted my mates and i dont like it when someone comes in thinking they can insult anyone they like and get away with it ok though i guess you are right about insulting her back and im sorry about that and i am really sorry noname if i upset you or made you angry but your crazziness is funny and cool while all she does is be mean to us which makes me really angry and upset and have you heard what she has said on other pics its quite upsetting/mean/making me angry/quite worrying

grrrr.....

Noname, why are you being so friendly towards this guy? (Mnementh is a male dragon from Pern, so I assume menenth is a guy) Do you know him? I sure as Hell don't except some one like that as a friend. No way, no how.

Aiolos does have a point noname im starting to feel sick just saying sorry to that guy he said on another pic that he had only come here to take the piss(please excuse my language)out of nerds which is terrible hopw can you stick up for someone like that

im sorry i didnt mean that altho i sed it and tanx noname uve made me come out straight so im soory for wot i've sed, and btw im a guy, lol, i leave u with that to ponder.

ok then mnementh im sorry about it if you are maybe EVERYONE can try to put it behind them

thankyou

see? its better to singn the treaty then let the war rage on. and im a softy some times so i give alot of people second chances. and theres alwas a good side to every one.

No treaty for me, Eric-clone. Your glued to my badside.

i really like this drawing it was really well done!

if you PROMISE not to speak like that again, i guess i can be your friend as well....

Aiolos you forgave me... so why not her?

Him. And you didn't talk like that to my friends. See, if he had been like you when you first came, then yes, I would have forgiven him. Chances are, I'll forgive him anyway. It's hard for me to hold a grudge for too long, unless your Erica or Tyler.

well at l;east its all over now and the insults can stop and i can go back to not being confused and feeling guilty

uh huh

aiolos if they can forgive me, and it was akira i was mean to surely u can

say something nice for once!!!!!!!!!

that fiished ages ago

AWESOME!

crazy good drawing

shading's very nice...