awws *huggles sad dragon*

It's yours, and like you said, it's old so it's definitely not one of your better ones. I would have put at least a pupil in the eye, I'm not sure how well ghost eyes work for the emotion.

Expression and head lines are nice, but yeah you sould detail it more

Oh, I just noticed this, the bottom jaw should be more defined. A cheek bone, a lower jaw, and a chin jutting out are all important details, it's not just a straight line.

rp, anyone? if we were trying to fight an enemy who seems to predict our ever move, and now he is in his dark, dampp castle which is filled with spider webs and creepy decorative spikes. we have found no opposition or booby traps, and are trying to find him in his castle, what would we do? IC: *plods along quitely, but even the soft scrape of my claws seems to echo louder than a drum in these silent halls*

*Fallows Nayru closely making small whimpering noises and constantly glancing around*

*a small sctratching sound is heard in a corner* *turns head and growls softly and sinisterly*

*Arches back like a cat and hisses in the direction of the noise still staying behind Nayru*

*ducks head while entering through doorway, now ignoring the sound* *doorway opens up into huge room with high, valted ceiling*

*Fallows, looking back toward the noise once more just to be sure* *Enters the room and looks around* Wow, this room is huge.

*hisses quitely* shh!! we dont know who can hear us. *a large throne sits in the back of the room, and stome statues line the wallls*

*Folds ears back and does as he's told* *Eyes the throne*

HELLO!!!! RP HERE!! comments, anyone?

*from the dark corner of the cave, the scratching sound returns, but louder and heavier* *slowly, calmly, a giant spider strolls out* spider: hello, nayru, clue, and firedrake. it has been a while, hasnt it?

*comes from the darkness and says*You guys need some help?

*Shivers* Yuck, a spider.

spider: ahh, but of course you would say that. who would ever guess that the creature who haunts your dreams at night would be the same creature who controls the eight mages? ooc: the eight mages are the main council going against the king dragon, the "good guy"

Ah im sorry guys i gotta eat but nice talking to you all!

*Swallows and looks timidly at the ground* Oh sorry I didn't mean to offend you.
(Bye Firedrake!)

@clue: well, its just you and me now spider: you are sorry? why? you have not offended me. it is interesting having my pawns despise me

hey!! comment!!

great, i'm alone now...

I just thought it was a bit rude is all. you can't help that you're a disgusting spider. ^^ (I'm so sorry but I actually have to go to! ): I enjoyed your company though!)

*sigh* bye

*Rana lost the group quite a bit earlier while exploring the evil-looking castle, and is now lost and bumbling about, seeing strange visions of herself as Frodo in shelob's lair*

* Like Rana, I to am lost. After coming to countless dead ends, I decide to make my own path* *Charging a ball of red-black lightning in my hand, I blast a hole through the wall in front of me* *After the dust clears I find myself in the room with Nayru, Clue and the spider* U~uh.... Hi? *laughs nervously*

*As Rana bumbles about, she finds that the webs surrounding the rooms has several cold, dead, lifeless bodies hanging from the various strands* *shudders* *suddenly, she stops, nearly running smack into a wall but not caring about that* *in front of her is yet another body, but this one is breathing...barely, and seems to be waking up from a deep stupor* *she opens her eyes, blinks a couple times, then shrieks suddenly, struggling to get free* Rana: Stop STOP! You'll alert the spider! Calm down! *The girl stops, staring in shock as Rana quickly slices the spider wbs tying her* Girl: Who...who are you? Rana: I'm rana. I'm a friend. I was here to kill the spider with a group of other friends, but I kinda got lost...^-^'. I guess that's a good thing though because I found you, huh. Girl: *brushes webs off her shoulder* I-I guess. I'm Myra.

spider: @rana: the shelob? you dare compare me with that scrawny wimp of a spider? and you, he-dragon clue, it is not as amusing the second time. no pawn has the right to attack their player, much less a weakling who cowers behind a female! (nayru): *hisses and arches back* (spider): *twitches front claw* hmm... there seems to be a prisoner on the loose... *twitches another claw, and rana finds herself cught in a web as well, and the girl she was near gets caught as well* *nayru, who cannot see her sister, is oblivios to the twitch*

OOC: Wait...I'm nowhere near the spider. I'm in a completely different part of the castle. I was just thinking that in my head! IC: *myra shrieks as she's grabbed up by the web again, clawing futilely at it with her hands* NO NO NO NO NO!!!! *Rana just in time grabs out Mizu before her movement is totally hindered, and draws out a small tendril of water from the sword, which she begins to move by force of will*

ooc: oops, sorry. ic: (nayru): *leaps at spider, claws extended fully* hyaaaa!!!! (spider): *sidesteps* oh, no, that wont do! pawns versus pawns, player versus player, you know. *all statues along wall come to life and attack dragons*

*I leap away from a now living statue, and land softly next to Clue* *With a burst of black fire, Sanguine appears in my hand as a barbed long-sword* *red-black electricity dances and flickers along the blade, as I point it at a group of threee statues. A ball of compressed energy forms at its tip, and with a defening BOOM, a massive lightning bolt arcs from my blade and blast the statues to dust*

(spier) *seems shocked* hmm, you are a strong peice. how can you do against mine? *with a strange, elaborate motion of his middle leg, the spider seems to call forth a human* *the human is panting slightly, but looks very strong. he is clad in a black velvet robe with a large hood* yessss, come, and taste my magic! Attack! *the mage (yes, the human was a mage) lifts his hands and causes the floor beneath all the dragons to collapse*

*With a sharp burst of mental power, rana transforms the tendril into a sharp, spinning disc, and slices through the web strands holding Myra and herself* Rana: Come on, let's go! Myra: *nods* *Rana and Myra are now running down the hallways, with the shelob music playing all around them, intensifying the scene and making Myra gasp not just for breath but for fear as well* Rana: Come on! We have to get out of the reach of these webs! Myra: THIS WAY! *she grabs Rana's hands and drags her down a tiny hallway, where the spider seems to have forgotten to place any webs* *the hallway continues, back and forth on and on, never ending in a dead end although Rana keeps thinking it should*

*I only fall a short disantce, when, with another burst of black fire, I change to my dragon form* *my wings spread to fill a large portion of the chamber* * I roar thunderously and breath forth a deluge of unstopable Void-fire at the mage, who narrowly dodges it, his robes singed*

(nayru): *opens wings and soars up after silveera* (spider): *goes into a corner and relaxes, letting the mage do all the fighting* this is quite interesting, i wonder what else you will think of. (mage): *twitches fingers and causes all dragons to feel a mass amount of pain for a few seconds* (spider): *laughs evily, enjoying the veiw of dragons writhing in pain*

*looks at the Mage with a dragons equivillant of a smirk* That was not a smart thing to do, mage * I suddeny dissapear (yay for void portals ^^) reappearing seconds later behind the mage, in elthren form* *The mage has no time to react, as I stab the flaming Sanguine though his back, and out his chest. Then with a bloody, tearing sound a rip it back out, the barbes shreading his insides. With a last, blood curdling scream, the irridecent red flames burn him to nothing within seconds*

OOC: Surely of all the mages of darkness at least one would have some influence and/or power in the Void to hinder that kinda movement. IC: *As rana and myra race through the halls, they eventually break out of their small weaving halls into a gigantic one, rising more than thirty feet to the ceiling and at least as wide as the length of a football field* *the whole place is absolutely covered in webs, and rana and myra have to tiptoe very careful to avoid being caught* *as they advance slowly down the hall, they realize that they are coming upon a huge oaken door at the end of it, but neither of them have any idea how to get through it, or even if they should go through it

OOC: Only beings born of the Void have controll over its energies, mages, no matter what type, are of the mortal world therefor, they have no influence or power in or over the Void

(spider): very well, you must have a formidable player behind you. but i am the best of all! How well can you do against this? *moves every claw but one and seven mages appear* (mage two): *does an elegant move with arms, and speciffically attacks silveera, causing her to lose all control of her fire and other magical powers* *uses silveeras fire against her, causing her to be caught in a swirl of flames* (mage 3): *flys off in the direction of myra and rana* (mage 4-7): *stand in circular formation, and cause the ground between them to turn black, and a huge, demon-like creatue begins to rize out slowly* ooc: i'm sorry, you guys, please try your best to get out of yuour predicaments! btw, iu have thought of all these characters before-hand, so i am not going to let them do anything that i had not originally planned, such as the first mage will not come back. and i, as nayru, will lleave the fight, because it's kind of hard for me to fight agains myself... do good luck! may the best player win. also, does nobody see the many referances to pawns, paices, and players that the spider is making?

*as the flames surround me I scream, but not with pain* *Having lost my controll of fire, and my other powers gone. The demon blood in me is taking controll of my body as the magical barries that kept it at bay shatter* *A wave of black energy erupts from my body as I beggin to change. My hair changes from dark lavender to blood red, the whites of my eyes become black, the irises silver and the pupils reduce to slits. My forearms become hugely clawed hands, and two short, ridged black horns protrude from my forehead. My dragon wings burst from my shoulders, no longer red, but black streaked with glowing silver markings* *an inhuman growl rumbles in my throat as I narrow my eyes at the scene unfolding in the chamber* Well this is interesting *when I speak, it's cold and emotionless, and it sounds as though there is more than one voice (like how ichigo sounds when he has his hollow mask on)*

[spider]: *quickly crawls next to silveera* welcome, my queen. do you see these pawns of malagin? destroy them, along with your king, who is being called by the mages. [ooc]: when the spider said the word "malagin" you were trapped in his invisible web made of magic, and you are now falling quickly under his control. [mage 2] *stands on gaurd from silveera, but does not attack* [Mage 3] *is still looking for rana and myra* [mage 4-7] *have lifted the demon-like creature up to his waist, but the demon for now is as still as stone* ooc: silveera, now that you are in his web, everything that once looked like it was on the bad side is now looking good, and the mages now appear to be clothed in white, not in black.

OOC: Ok, I has an idea for mage number 3 (the one chasing us). I think he ought to be a controller of dark water...cuz that would be so friggin cool!!!! *squeegasps* Ahem! anyway...on with the roleplay! IC: Rana: I've had enough of this! *with a mighty cry she charges at the door, slicing through locks and latches with Mizu, and throwing the door wide open* *outside the sun shines brightly and warmly, like a perfect late spring day, with green rolling hills everywhere and even a large lake nearby* Rana: Come on Myra! We're free! *Myra beams a huge smile and races off into the landscape, Rana right on her heels* *Suddenly, the sky seems to darken and rana and myra feel like they're being pushed inwards by unbearable pressure* *a cold, calculating voice surrounds them, singing in notes but not in words, spreading fear into the hearts of the two girls* Rana: WHO ARE YOU! Show yourself!!!

ooc: ...singing??? *sigh, oh well. you can have your cute little singing magi... @silveera and clue: where did you guys go? ic: [mages 4-7] *have risen the demon-creature completely up from the ground, and he is now moving* [spider]: yesss! *demon creature roars* go! go my queen and king, wipe out all the white pawns on our doorstep! leave none of the king-dragon's armies alive! *demon creature swoops out with a black coud billowing around him* *silveera, who is not yet completely under the spiders control...* [mages 4-7] *begin a chant, again in circular formation* *nothing seems to happen at first.* ooc: @rana: i have no idea what the third mage is doing, so you can control him for now.

* I fight feebly against the spiders control, but it's useless, as I spread my wings and follow after the demon creature. Following my masters biding*

ooc: you must be able to see the web with which he controlls you, then have the willpower and desire to cut it, and it must be cut with magic to be able to get free. ic: [spider]: *craws back into his cave int the corner of the room* [mages 4-7] *are still chanting, but now a distant but loud thundering sound can be heard* [mage 2]: *dissappears in a dark cloud* ooc: do you guys want nayru to come back and help you out, 'cuz you are all is pretty tight predicaments...

*still fighting feebley against the spiders controll, I suddenly sense my powers sealed within the mage2. With a mental rench, I gain a small amount of controll, and I plow into Mage2* *Sinking my claws into his body, I tear him to ribbons. My powers being restored the instant his heart stops* *with a shudder I change back to normal, and activate my Hunters sight, which allows me to se everything... including the spiders invisible web* *with a huge effort of will, I form a whip of black fire, and slash the webs to pieces, finaly freeing myself from the spiders control*

w00t! [spider] *senses a disturbance in the web and crawls out to investigate* [mage two] the fire from the whip travels along the web and attacks the closest thing to it, namely, the 2nd mage* [mages 4-7] *continue their chant* [nayru] *looks outside and sees a HUGE shadow army sttacking the king-dragon's army* oh no...! *sees spider, who is now out of his hole* you... will.... DIE!!! *leaps toward spider in a fit of rage*

*I turn towards the spider and angry glare on my face* You will PAY you hairy legged b@$t@rd! No-one tries to control me and get's away with it!! *I Leap at the spider as Sanguine reappears in my hand, in the form af a double-bladed scythe, ice-blue flames and red-black lightning dance and flicker along the blades*

[spider] ENOUGH!! i will not have pawns trying to defeat the master player! *without hardly moning a muscle, he makes it so that nayru and silveera moove as though going through syrup* [nayru] *struggles to move* how... DARE you call us pawns!! we are not some worthless peicess to be played!!

OK, Now I am officialy pi$$ed off! * A pulse of red energy erupts from my hand, followed seconds later by a tearing sound* *A huge tear appears in the air behind the spider, and numerous growls, screatches and roars pierce the air* Prepare to fight MY army Hairy Legs! Ten thousand too ONE! * suddenly hundreds upon hundreds of demons gush out of the Void portal and atatack the spider. When ever he goes to stop them with his webs, they dissappear into portals, reappearing somewhere else seconds later*

spider: *encases self in a web sheild, but it is destroyed by demons* *as he is attacked, and the webs are cut, nayru can see that his army outside seems to bwe growing and the king dragon's armies getting larger* nayru: their bonds are being cut! they're being set free!!! (though, of course, no help to nayru, that is!) [mages 4-7]: combine magic and to a massive strike to all demons summoned by silveera, but few are killed, though most are severly wounded*

*Now able to move freely, I change to dragon form* *with a deadly snarl I lunge at the remaining mages, breathing a torrent of fire at them*

*all mages besides the cute singing water one are dead, and the spider is haveing a very hard time fighting off the demons. even though they are wounded*

OOC: We need some stuff from Rana..... IC: *I slowly turn back to my dragora form, and lean against the wall, watching tierdly as my demons fighting the spider* *all the sitching and changing forms, and high level attacks and summoning demons is sapping my energy, and I can barely stand*

ooc:SHHH!!!! she's here, in this room, and wants to steal the computer from me!! ic: [spider] is weakening considerably and has no time to use magig*

OOC: *waves franticaly* HI RANA!!!!! IC: *i slump to the bottom of the wall, exhaustion consuming me*

*suddenly, a shattering, ragged sream fills the room, and the spider is still, his limbs curling beneath him*

*Opens eyes a crack* Check Mate B@$t@rd

OOC: *waves back* HI SILVEERA!!! IC: *after an epic battle, the "cute singing mage" suddenly stops attacking, then, clutching at his chest, he shrieks and dissipates into a million floating particles, then scatters about on the wind* (this is coinciding with the death of the spider) Rana: Well...that was a cool battle. Too bad the others didn't get to see it! XD