The tail is... broken. Is this intended?

it wouldn't fit on the paper =/

it looks kool

lol i was like 'omg! its sunday night already and i havent sent anything in for weeeks' O.O xD thnks

i likes ur drawings your heads are great my heads can sometimes turn out very bad

Hmmm...it looks like you did a couple different things with your profile this time, which look pretty cool, especially the white hair and blue markings. As for critiquing...there are a couple things 1) Obviously, the tail. If you don't have enough room for the tail, either make it shorter, or extend it beyond the page, or curve it around a little, but breaking it off like that just looks really weird... 2) Whatever you did at the shoulder blades is a little weird, I'm having trouble understanding exactly what the inward curving backwards texture is supposed to be and why it's misaligned with the rest of the body. 3) A common but fixable problem--it has only two legs. 4) These are just some minor details, the line of the bottom of the neck doesn't smoothly transfer into the chest, and the chest overall seems a little bit too big and squarish for the rest of the body. But other than that, this is really cool.

i agree the chest is a bit too big and the base of the neck that joins the withers is too small to hold up the head

Hi peoples! Maybe the feet are also a bit too small...

*salute to everyone* well next time ill try to improve but this is still a work in progress...

Size-wise I think the back feet are fine, it's just that the over-large chest makes everything smaller in comparison.

I think the thing by the shoulder blades is the base of the wings. Also, Rana, there are no set proportions for dragons. I don't mean to be rude, but a dragon can be interpreted in any way shape or form. There is no "correct" body type for a dragon. Again, I don't mean to cause any arguments, just pointing that out.

hello, Dfire. how are you today?

@Dragonfire: I know that, and I will say this again, I only point out what I think could be changed to make the art more pleasing to the eye. That's all I'm doing in my critique. I'm not saying that the chest absolutely MUST be smaller or it will be wrong, I'm only saying that if the chest were smaller, it would make the overall picture look better in my own opinion.

@Rana Mizu: ah ok. @Dark Dragon: I'm mighty fine, just finished a science report that I am pretty darn pleased with. *basks in the warm glow of acomplishment*

cool. what was it about?

Tis Senior Graduation day! YAY! *throws streamers for all seniors-soon-to-be-freshman haha!* (I be not a senior meself but...one should always use any chance to celebrate! ^_^)

yays *starts to throw steamers*

*seniors throw graduating caps into the air*

*runs in to throw one as well* yay class 2009! i can't believe i only have monday, tuesday and wendsay left of skool and then 7 days til graduation O.O

....*waves little green flag*...class of 2011.... ...eh, congrats to the college going people too....XD

*waves pitiful little green flag with Kelsey* Anyway, Congrats to Catc! *huggles catc* So...are you really going off to college??

yeppers n.n i'm actually staying home and driving to college and then next year i have to move down closer so that when i transfer to my other college i get hte in state tuition instead of the out of state Me and Hope all on our own

Awww! *hope huggle* I'm sure you'll make tons of new friends and have an awesome time! You can still come back to your family during vacations and everything too.

xD dad says he's turning my room into his writting room Hope is going to be so freaked out though because there is not going to be any other animal there... she'll be like the ultimate queen on the place!

I don't think being ultimate queen = freaked out for kitties. I think she'd be pretty darn happy

ya i guess ur right xD she would have the whole place to herself, the comp chair to herself and *gasp* the bed to herself! ahhhh i can't wait until that time when i can sleep in til past 6:00 no more 5:30 *does a happy dance*

I don't get up before six anyway, lol.

lucky xD 5:30 every morning including weekends,,, no wait i lied xD its 6:30 in weekends wow an hor sleep in what's dad thinking O.O it takes dad like 15 minutes to get me actually out of bed every day xD

ah, see, that's better. I get up at 6:30 too...but not on weekends

i gets up around 6:00, but if i have to finish something for school i can wake up around 4:30 or so...x___x which is what i'll probably be doing tonight...

ooooh...that's not good! Can't you get your homework done after school?

not always...especially with big ol projects i forgot about until the last few days =/ and i make up for the lost hours of sleep during the weekend 8]

lolz. I hated those last big projects at the end of the year. It was like a double whammy, you didn't want to work but if you didn't work your grade plummeted.

totally that happenned in my chem class... i forgots all the time to do homework and it really plummetted the grade, luckily though ms b let me turn it in for full credit...

ugh...the last few weeks of school have been totally rancid for me. my only major project really was a report on biomes in my env. science class. That was around Spring Break, when I was going to go on a cruise. We had a month to work on it before the break and I completely forgot until the last week and had to uber-rush between that and other assignments...aside, I did well. I also had to do a powerpoint on a country, I chose Poland....it was horrible because I can't fully operate powerpoint....just learned how to animate the slides. *gun in the head*. The last few weeks though have just been killer in all classes. World History teach had two chapters left to give us so she split us into groups, gave us sections, and made us teach the class...horrible...and my English teacher randomly decided to have a Julius Caesar (irritating Shakespeare play) project for us. I hate her...I've worked my ass off in her class and only got a B...plus there's the "its the end of the year and I don't want to do anything anymore" syndrome...which sucks.....has only two more days left! both half days though, and both testing days XP Then I's FREEEEEEEE! *takes off into flight like a deflating balloon*

*watches kelsey's crazy flight* Summer was always and ever such a wonderful time...*sigh* too bad I have to work!