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Author:  Wardonis [ Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:05 pm ]
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Note its not complete and the program i was using was really annoyin i think i can only do so many a day. The discription will come later


Deck 1
http://www.imaginationcubed.com/loader. ... e=Wardonis

Hanger
http://www.imaginationcubed.com/loader. ... e=Wardonis

Sorage Underbelly
http://www.imaginationcubed.com/loader. ... e=Wardonis

Deck 2
http://www.imaginationcubed.com/loader. ... e=Wardonis

Main Engineering
http://www.imaginationcubed.com/loader. ... e=Wardonis

Author:  Forgotten Dragon's Ire [ Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:14 pm ]
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I'll take the pilot and sniper positions I still need to think up a character but just to let you know i'm thinking

Author:  Wardonis [ Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:33 pm ]
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I'd prefer if everyone posted 2 or 3 positions they'd like or settle for, that way if more than 1 person wants a specific position i can shimmi things to work out.

Author:  Drakel [ Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:36 pm ]
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I kind of doubt any one will want the same position that some one else already called. But I would like

Main Position: Tactical
Side position: Engineer

to be my positions (preferably tactical)

Author:  Forgotten Dragon's Ire [ Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:23 am ]
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Main: Pilot and Sniper
Alts: Engineer and Heavy weapons specialist

Author:  Wardonis [ Sat Feb 06, 2010 2:52 pm ]
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We still need another 3 players if any of you know anyone who might be interested.

Author:  RoomaLight5 [ Sat Feb 06, 2010 10:44 pm ]
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i am in too i just don't know what to be yet and she is not the only one that know him i do to he is my boyfriend

Author:  Forgotten Dragon's Ire [ Sun Feb 07, 2010 11:58 am ]
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Wow we have quite a few people that know each other

Author:  Drakel [ Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:40 pm ]
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Yes but the strange thing is that they ALL KNOW CIARDA! OMG is she a god or something lol. bet she is the president or a dictator trying to own the world lol

Author:  raptor [ Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:13 pm ]
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I got your pm, but I don't know what to be.

Author:  Wardonis [ Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:44 pm ]
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use your imagination and be anything your heart desires. When I actually start the thread i have a semi-long bit about the general goverment of the galaxy, it being just past the peak of the 2nd galactic empire and all.

Author:  raptor [ Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:02 pm ]
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Name: Naomi

Race: cyclops

Position: ship repairer


Naomi is cyclops with red hair who is half human. Her race is known for repairing machines and are good building monuments. She has the appear of someone who has light, honey color skin. Lucky for her she appears more human than cyclops and hides her hair under long red hair until she gets to know you.

Author:  Wardonis [ Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:09 pm ]
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I like it, so your thinking about being engineer? And maybe a field medic when were not on the ship?

Author:  raptor [ Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:12 pm ]
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Well her race is known for being good with their hands, not with weapons or anything pointy,

Author:  Wardonis [ Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:25 pm ]
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Alrighty. that just leavs us needing 1 more.

Author:  Ciarda [ Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:51 pm ]
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What position do you require??

Author:  raptor [ Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:37 pm ]
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When are we getting started.

Author:  Wardonis [ Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:17 am ]
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we need 1 more, i sent u a PM Ciarda. after that i just have to throw the initial twist together, so if we got another tomorrow i could have it written up and we could start this weekend most likly.

Author:  Drakel [ Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:21 am ]
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Wait.... we are almost ready?! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....... I DIN'T FINISAH THE PIC OF MY CHAR I PROMISED TO SHOW EVERY ONE! :shock:

Author:  Constitutiona [ Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:34 am ]
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I'll join, sounds like it could be entertaining. Let me dig up Corana's bio from my folders and do some tweaking to it, then I'll post her for approval.

Author:  Wardonis [ Tue Feb 16, 2010 6:38 pm ]
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Captain: Me
Pilot: FDI Demo/Heavy Weps
Comm: Constitutiona Melee
Nav: Ciarda Sniper
Tactical: Drakel mid range
Engineering:Aquadraca medic
Sci/anyl: Rooma Mid Range

With that in place i'm going to heavily put everything into place, 1 thing i want in everyones char backgrounds is why they were chosen as a best of the best. aside from that were good to go, give me till this weekend atleast to put together a basic universe bacground and discription of the ship. at the moment we start we all are standing in an empty hanger on a space station over looking a planet. u all are lined up and i'm pacing befor you all giving a lecture. have fun with ur backgrouns.



i'm going to be starting the thread when i'm ready, we can use this as the ooc for it but the RP thread name will be Maelstrom, because thats the name of the ship. post your char discriptions here plz. and drakel repost the final version plz with everyone elses.

good luck and have fun

Author:  Drakel [ Tue Feb 16, 2010 6:54 pm ]
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ok here is the information you wanted.

Name: Cyriscel (Cie-riss-cell)

Gender: Male

Age: Unknown

Race: Valadorrum (Val-la-door-rum) (also known as Wraiths)

About the race: The Valadorrum’s are actually a crystal like beings. They don’t carry weapons and have a Crystal body that is impossible to break. They were at war against the human race about three hundred years ago for a powerful energy humans have in their bodies (AKA the “human soul”) but found out that humans had potential and found out a NEWWER energy source that is about five times more powerful than a human soul that is still kept secret today. Their eyes can only see everything by their energy. No mouth so they kind of talk telepathically yet every one can hear them so it is like they talk without talking. Strangely they bleed silver colored blood. They feed off of energy to stay alive. They have 2 arm and 2 legs. The arms could be used for stabbing. They can live as long as they get to feed off of energy. Less energy they have the less lifespan they have, they could live forever if they have enough energy but it depends. They could live from 2 weeks to unlimited. If they don’t feed once a day there life energy goes away and could instantly die (kind of like how a battery works less energy they have the more chances there are for it to die on you). Their home planet is literately about -280° to -700° So they live very well in the cold without freezing for some reason. They don’t breath at all so they could do actually go into space without as much problems. The Valadorrum’s are fast at running and walking but they could also use their energy to fly and levitate. The only way for everyone to tell male from female is the color of the crystals on their bodies. The Valadorrum’s are also show only 5% of its real body outside of the Crystal armor. Their Real bodies are extremely sensitive to touch so barely cutting the skin would be painful enough to kill them. When they die their bodies melt and evaporate instantly so no one could study them. Their real body is strange and nothing understands the whole complications of it however the crystal armor is mildly hollow so that the body could fit or hide in it (will explain a lot by the picture I am still making). They also don’t really react to insults however if someone is to do minor attacks( the punch on shoulder, small push and also if someone threw a small stone) against this race they take it as full threat and attack with Deadly force. The other races keeps a close eye on them to make sure no one does any small actions against this race and to make sure the Valadorrum’s don’t kill any one for taking small actions. Other than that this race is completely unknown, Scientists have tried to find out the secrets of Valadorrum life span and even their body’s true form. The scientists have only just discovered that the Valadorrum’s could “resurrect” the human dead if the chosen human had enough energy to live again but the human must be turned into a Valadorrum in the very secretive and racial process. No one has even a clue on how that could be but it is. Only one out of every five hundred living beings truly has that much energy to be resurrected by a Valadorrum.

Appearance: I will draw it out for you as best as I can but here is all I can say right now About 8,3
( feet to tip of head.) and the crystals on the body are blue.

Weapons: They stab their target and they shoot crystals (both weapons has a shock effect.) Nothing more nothing less.

Weaknesses: They are VERY weak on their skin areas (like the chest) so shooting them there is their weak spot. They hate fire for some reason (enough to say they are afraid of fire). Lack of energy will kill them and they are blind when they don’t see any energy around them. Plasma has no effect on them but strangely the normal bullet does (only on the chest area) and fire elemental like guns scares them off for some unknown reason(does not matter where someone shoots with fire elemental guns it harms them horribly) . Any overly warm (like deserts) areas will either kill them or keep them away yet minorly warm (like forests or plains) they can stand. Poison/acid elements harm Valadorrums so badly that it will literately kill them before the poison/acid takes effect. Normal steel bullets will actually shatter them when shot at on the chest. RED plasma

Abilities: Intelligent, very fast when both running and flying, Crystal part of body is unbreakable and VERY sharp, can feel energy around them so they could sense everything however less energy around them the more blind they are. They can actually live in the coldest of places. Douse not breath at all so they are safe when going out into space and they can handle the pressure of space and underwater seas. shock immunity, frost immunity levitate and flight. Immune to clear and blue plasma's.

Description: Cyriscel is very strange to most humans and the humans HATED having him on board as a crew member because of the fact that his race was the latest war against humanity. However He proved himself quite useful to the crew many times by fixing up the outside of the ship and his unspeakable combat strategies against the enemy when on a ship called F.A.C.E.B.A.C. 52. He was once offered the title of ship commander but refused for some strange reason. Once his old crew knew the title he was offered they tried to kill him on the ship he once called home. They horribly failed in doing so because he killed them all by literately out smarting them. He is now assigned with a new crew and accepted because the logic was reasonable. However he thinks that he might be accepted better with the new crew. He prefers it when the weather is at most 55° only yet can also live in weather up to 80°.

Main Position: Tactical
Side positions: Engineer, Navigations
Combat type: N/A (kind of midrange mixed with natural melee)(sorry but he is a small mix between the two.)

Why he was chosen: After his own members was killed by and “incident” he had no other choice. He lived for an unknown amount of years that dated back when the humans and Valadorrums. His combat tactics was so unmatched that he knew what to do and how to do it when it came to jobs. He literately destroyed a fleet with only twenty ships. No one was able to compete against him when it came to combat tactics. He was given the ability to become caption but chose against it for the sake of his own crew and after the incident occurred he chose to join the crew but as a Tactical specialist instead of a caption. He knows more about combat tactics than anything and his skill on tactics was admired and hated by everyone. Admired because his skill in tactics was beyond unmatched but hated because of the fact that it is unmatched. Some of his methods are disliked and insane but they always paid off to victory. He likes to be alone most of the time and he is always looking for better combat tactics. He tries his best to make sure no one gets hurt in a fight and is most of the time trying to understand the other races on the ship. However he is easily tricked to do outer space repair jobs seeing does not breathe and he could navigate without trouble but he is more perfect to be a tactical specialist.

Author:  Constitutiona [ Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:56 pm ]
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Okay, here are Corana's stats (after i mortalized her and removed her magical and goddess abilities)

Name: Corana
Race: human
Height: 5'1"
Looks: waist length wavy hunter green hair
sapphire eyes
pale skin, though it is more tan in color than white
Weapons: prefers sharp pointy objects, but very well versed in 15 different forms of hand to hand combat
bio: only child of Eve, Empress of the Element Earth, father unknown. gets along great with just about everybody. Enjoys a good brawl every once and a while. Has an ear for languages, and enjoys building things. uses her lack of height to her advantage in a fight. Finds anyone who under estimates her highly entertaining. she was chosen for her position aboard the maelstrom because her abilities to translate languages and the fact the she is extremely level headed.

Main Position: Communications
Combat type: Melee

Author:  Ciarda [ Wed Feb 17, 2010 3:27 am ]
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sounds good. I'll get my stats up ASAP

Author:  Forgotten Dragon's Ire [ Wed Feb 17, 2010 10:21 am ]
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I'm working out the final details of my character will have it up by friday

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