or a couple of minutes
i'm in
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| Author: | wut2say [ Mon Mar 16, 2009 11:52 am ] |
| Post subject: | Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
Ok, so i want to try something.... Thanks to the magical world of school i've been writing a lot of lame poetry and i want to bring back the stuff i love. So for anyone who really likes to write poetry i want to try a verse by verse poem. For those who dont know what that is: One person (me) writes a verse and then the next post will be another person verse and so on and so forth.... The rules: 1. Dont be a jerk and write something completely random, we want something to be proud of. So try and follow a story line, if necessary i will think up a general topic at the beginning that we can follow. 2. if the poem seems to be dying, say so and we can start another 3. keep it pg. we are writing a GOOD poem. like the type you overanalyze in school without the overanalyzing. 4. you're writing ONE verse. 4-6 lines give or take a line or two. 5. did i mention dont be a jerk? I wont start until we have like, two or three other people intersted. and i swear i will get on a check, i wont vanish again! Silv, if this is in the wrong place, feel free to move it and yell at me. I'm rusty. |
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| Author: | Falconer [ Mon Mar 16, 2009 1:30 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
I'm in. I've actually started to get into the whole poetry thing, now. |
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| Author: | Silentiea [ Mon Mar 16, 2009 5:05 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
This seems interesting. I've done this with short stories at parties and such, long with doing it via email, but I've never tried it in poetry. I'm in. |
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| Author: | wut2say [ Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:14 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
one more one more one more. and we'll start. |
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| Author: | Falconer [ Mon Mar 16, 2009 9:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
You said two or three. I personally think it could be days before we enlist another member. |
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| Author: | dragonfly [ Mon Mar 16, 2009 9:51 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
or a couple of minutes i'm in
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| Author: | Blue Tiger [ Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:22 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
Im iterested, but I think I would take quite a while to get a verse right, and by then someone would have allready completed it.. |
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| Author: | Falconer [ Wed Mar 18, 2009 7:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
I'll start, I guess. I'm staring into the starry night Thinking of the things I meant to say. The deeds that I now wish I'd done. To lead me to a different day. |
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| Author: | Blue Tiger [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 4:49 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
Ill make an attempt... Nothing lasts forever All times must pass The sun, the moon, everything in existence, in constant motion How long will this night last? |
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| Author: | wut2say [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 8:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
yay! ok, epic fail on my part. Sorry, i'll get better. The stars are winking me answers but i'm too far to hear their words I must follow along my own path and these knots i have been steering towards |
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| Author: | Falconer [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 8:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
I take the night into my hands, Twist it, mold it, shape it right. Guide it along its chosen path. Until the sun will shed its light. |
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| Author: | wut2say [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 8:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
As the day rises from the dark I see what i hold in my hand Nightly clay starts to harden Til without me it can stand |
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| Author: | Pandora [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 9:05 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
I'll try....don't laugh at me.... Now, it flourishes in the light growing in bright rays of orange and warm yellows It tickles across the world around me Yet the picture of the night still dances in my mind |
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| Author: | wut2say [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 9:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
hey, i like it! It turns towards me with new knowing eyes I flinch at the truth held there within Though glowing with day hidden inside Is the knot of night from which its life was given |
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| Author: | Falconer [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 10:46 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
Night in day, darkness light Spun around the stars and moon. Within us all, the shadows live. We walk the paths of darkened doom. |
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| Author: | wut2say [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 10:50 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
I know it's short but can we end it there? i like it. Otherwise we can continue, i am easily satified. |
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| Author: | Falconer [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 10:53 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
Are you kidding? End now, when it's just getting good? |
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| Author: | wut2say [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 11:01 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
sigh, alright. my simplicity is overruled... Forever begging for hope renewed we search the darkness found in light Uncovering answers we did not seek And fighting the scream with all our might |
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| Author: | Pandora [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 11:05 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
the call for help has been denied then we regret we've ever cried but lost forever we are not while, hope still shins bright |
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| Author: | Falconer [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 11:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
A nightmare awakened, man's own soul Bared for all the world to see. A poison, easily controlled By man's own will, simplicity. |
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| Author: | wut2say [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 11:08 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
though nothing simple is seen that way In the search of it the strips are torn And in those tears the way is lost For now the simple must be reborn |
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| Author: | Falconer [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 11:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
Perception turned to clarity, Complex turned simplicity. Deception truth, conception life, Trust risen from duplicity. |
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| Author: | wut2say [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 11:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
but shorn apart are these common goals for within man's nature there is fight and anything that once agreed Is seen as wrong and not as right |
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| Author: | Pandora [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 11:27 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
as opposites will always attract bringing the final balance into the world a balance that is unwavering even with in the face of unknowing |
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| Author: | wut2say [ Thu Mar 19, 2009 11:32 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Calling all poets who dont write on airplane barf bags!! |
but just as in music the balance is harmonic and one fell swoop can sour a note the one swoop came in the form of a rebellion and covered the world in a deep red coat |
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