i really like the scales, the eye culd use a bit more work but the scales are good -_^

second!!!

I agree with Akira Keep it up!

the scales are very good , only the eyeball itself needs a litle more shading and structure! but nonetheless , niece piece of work !

It looks a bit like it is going to be blind

Intruiging, whoa that was a long word, sometimes my intelligence astounds myself. exelent pic you can almost see it blinking, full of enery, passion and life. WOW IM ON A ROLL!

the eye could look better but its amazing

I agree with among you. My eye is pretty bad. I'm good at scales, but they take me forever to finish. I did this drawing all in regular pencil. It only took me less than an hour to finish this work.

I agree wif everybody. The scales are amazing, and yes, scales tend to take forever, and the eye needs a bit of work. Speaking of which, I need to draw an eye on one of my dragons! Thanks for reminding me!

HERE"S ONE!

We'll go with your idea...( hmm, that eye looks alot like the one in the Inheretance books)

oh okays.... we're walking along a mountian path and the trees are rustling and we hear some things, but we ignore them...* (you know it does! how odd...)

(OK) *i look around serenly* This place is so Beautiful... I love mountains..

* breathes in deeply* it smells pure and fresh.... it is beautiful...but do you smell that kind of piney wood-burning smell?

*i sniff* yeah, smells like burning pine pitch *look around carefuly, peering thrugh the trees* Do you think it could be a forest fire?

i hope not! it smells like it's comming from the north or maybe a little north east...

Just a second *i fly up to the tree tops and pirch on a large Spruce tree* Hmmm * I look north* I can see smoke, but it's not enough to be a forest fire, more like a camp fire! *i yell down to catc*

should we go and check it out? *i yell back up* can you see anybody or anything?

*i jump from the tree landing next to cat* No, i couldn't see anyone, the trees are to thick, but i think we should investigate *the is a funny look on my face* No one should be lighting fires in a forest that is predominantly pine

i know, any stray spark could be devestating..... well nows as good a time as any! *heads off towards the north*

*i follow catc but i'm not realy paying attention to where we are going, i'm to busy remembering some thing that happened many years ago*

*the smell begins to get thicker as we head closer and closer to the camp* (wat happened?)

(may I join in this role play of splenders?)

(sure! and hellos babyd! *glomps*)

(Okie-doke) *Trots behind cautiously*

*as we get even closer the crackle of the fire can be heard and a sound that sounds like a knife being sharpened and some whistling*

(it's a story i wrote about Maldonia, Silveera aka. me, used to live in a large forest, and was friends with many of the animals, hunters came to the forest, they were hunting a rare animal called the Ulana, in an attempt to save the Ulana, i fought the hunters and killed them, but my flame breth set fire to the forest and alot of animals perished) *We arive at the camp to find a large hunting party * *we are hidden behind some large bushes* *they have obviously caught animals, because there is a large number of fresh animal skins piled up in the clearing* i think we should turn into our human forms and act like we are also hunters

i totally agree...that way we won't startle them

Good idea! *becomes a human wearing hunter-stlye clothing*

*i turn into my elf form, i am wearing camo pants that are different shades of grey, and a black 3/4 sleeved shirt, a am carrying my longbow and a fletch ful of arrows* ok, lets greet our 'fellow' hunters

*turns to human form with camo pants and shirt and carry a shotgun*

*I have my hair tied to deskize my ears* *We walk into there camp, acting like we belong there* *i speak telepathicaly to catc and babydrgn* i think you guys shoud do the talking I'll observe the hunters

its aqua i am so sorry i have been gone!

(aqua! *glomps* wanna join?) okay.... hello how are y'all this fine day? see you got quite a haul today....

must login first

ok *hides behind bush behind silveera*

*the hunters eye us suspiciously* *some of them pass meningful looks to each other and others grab for their guns* Hunter 1: I'm quite well thank you, and yes we have had a good haul *he eyes us suspiciously* What would young ladies like yourselves be doin in a place like this? *he has a deepish voice and a handsome face, but there is something about him that just doesn't seem right*

*is human* um... just out walking... *smiles* what did you catch?

we were just hunting around the area....and sight seeing

*walks behind aqua and catc, shyly* ..........*looks arround nervously*

Hunter 2: *he is a big burly man with a beard* Oh yeh, and wat yous bea hunin?

see? *produces bow from behind back* didnt get much though...

We be "hunin" whatever we can find. *eyes the man*

we were huntin some biguns? u?

*after quiet observation, i have found that there is only 11 hunters, they appear to be 2 diffent groups who are sharing a camp site, the two who spoke to us are the leaders of the two groups* *I look at the first hunter who spoke to us, he looks realy familiar*

thanks silveera may we share your camp?

*eyes the others* Hunter 1: we'd be huntin mostly moose, antelope, beh we'r hopin fur sumthin rare...

Oh yes may we share your camp? We have been walking for long now....

Hunter 1: Of course you can share our camp site, but first we should introduce ourselves, my name is Murell, and the ones in green camo are my brother, Alessan *The one who looks alot like Murell waves, he is broad shouldered, tall, with dark hair that hangs in his face*, and our mates Klien and Mitch *who are obviosly twins* *they are medium hight, dark haired, and Skinny*.

wat kinda rare? i know what you mean silveera.....it's on the edge of my mind but i can't place it...

Hunter 2: i spose so... wddayou think, hakim?

nice to meet cha' i am catc and the others can tell you their names *glaces around the camp and all eyes are on us*

(read my last comment, it describes wat they look like) Hunter 2: Well, there ain't no point in inroducin, me self, and ma crew, cause we're leavin any who *with that, him and his mates, pick up there gear and leave*

My name is Shayna (babydrgn isn't a very good name for a human xD) *smiles friendly* *stops* Leaving? Why? *cocks head to one side*

oh you've got a camp some where else, huh? r u huntin the same thing?

me? i'm jenna... *we can't trust everyone, i think*

My name is... *i hesitate, i don't want them to know my real name* Niki, I'm the tracker and Leader of our hunting party go along with me on this one

i agree.....oaky, yes she's the tracker

Murell: Well, Niki, Catc, Shayna and Jenna, why don'y you join us for lunch? We're having beef and vegetable stew. Me: Sure, we haven't eaten all morning, and i'd welcome some hot stew

Sounds good to me! *rubs stomach hungrily* (oh my gawd that's what I had for dinner xD)

oh that does sound nice....thanks!

well niki, are we settling for the night?

(wow wat a coincidence! ) oh yes are we?

Hey guys, i just noticed some thing, there accents are Maldonian, like mine, i think I've met these hunters before! *we join the other three hunters around their camp fire, Alessan, Murell's brother, serves us a bowl of delicious smelling stew, each*

*sniffs stew* *thinks: but can we trust them?*

Well it doesn't seem that they reconise you? ...Thank you *sits and gulps down spoonfulls of stew*

i'm sure we an trust them..... oh do you suppose that they are the same hunters from before? *grabs the stew* thank ya!

don't worry Aqua, i would smell anything unatural in the stew, but it's fine, they don't suspect a thing, and catc, i couldn't tell you, i don't remember what the hunters looked like *i eat a spoonful of stew* Mmmm, this is good. Did you cook it Alessan? Alessan: Yep. *it is obvious that Alessan is a man of few words*

*whispers* i'm not from these parts, but when he said rare.... rare as in us? if so, we shouldn't stay here.

*finishes the bowl clean* Ah that was good...*licks lips*

i think it's something different aqua... so what do y'all plan on doin in the mornin'?

*comes crashing through the woods in human form, camo pants and green shirt* *my daggers are strapped to my ankles and i look around at everyone uneasily* um, hey guys. whats up?

Hey Dspice! We're just eatin steeeeww....Have a seat! Nice entro btw xD

(DSPICE! *glomps*) oh we've just met these guys and they let us camp here, oh and this is another member of our crew, she was scoping out the land..... for in the morning

*Klien and Mitch, don't say mutch either, but they keep darting warry looks at us* So *i ask* wha are you hunting any way? Murell: *he seems to consider my question* Well, according to some reliable sources, there are supposed to be some unusual beasts in the area, they're large, brown, long sabre fangs and bad tempers, i think they were called Caedra Beasts *He gives me a funny look, he has Obviously relised i'm Maldonian* Me: Realy! I didn't think Caedras were in this earth relm, obviousy they don't belong, they're far to dangerous caedra beast are about the size of a large dragon, so they are realy dangerous

*i glare at babydrgn* dont use my dragon name, dumdum! *i cough uneasily and sit down* (i already read all the past comments, so you dont need to fill me in on anything! )

Oops! *shrugs shoulders*

*i watch the hunters warily and unstrap one of my daggers, dragging the flat of the blade across my pants*

i sure hope ur right leaves. 1 sec.

sounds like a sabre toothed tiger to me.... are they really that rare? about how many are there?

they had better not think of seriously hunting them... or they may find themselves "hunting" a large camoflauged dragon. *i chuckle to myself*

Caedra beasts? Sounds scary!

*i continue wiping off my dagger, eyeing the hunters*

Caedra beast are reptiles, and they aren't rare, they shouldn't even be on earth! *Murell gives me a funny look, he has Obviously relised i'm Maldonian* Me: Realy! I didn't think Caedras were in this earth relm, obviousy they don't belong, they're far to dangerous caedra beast are about the size of a large dragon, so they are realy dangerous

so are you thinking they aren't caedra beasts?

No, i am thinking they are Caedra beast, some people in Maldonia think that the people of !st Earth would find them a great attraction for theme parks and stuff, they must have got free from who ever brought them here

If they aren't from this earth then why are they here?

hmm... so why do you think these hunters are, well, hunting them?

so they are covering up wat they're really hunting.....intresting... *gets gun out and begins to clean it and eyes the others across the fire*

*returns* you can't be thinking of hunting them! murell: you companion, niki, is she from around here? me: oh no, shes from WAY down south... *looks vague*

*straps dagger back on ankle* okay, it's getting really akward, and these hunters may start asking more questions...

well, Caedra beast are impervious to anything 1st earthers can throw at them, even atom bombs, so they could reak havoc on this place

*we have to do something, i think*

we have to leave before these hunters start probing...

That's not good..><

good thing they're not on this earth! *notices the other men whispering amonst each other and nodding*

* I take my shoulder pack off and take out a tent* well, i'm going to set up camp, you guys *i look at Dspice,aqua,catc and babydrgn* should do the same.. we can trust them, i know who they are

eh, if you say so silveera... *i stand up, not having said anything since i arrived, and start helping silveera set up the camp*

Fine *takes a sleepbag out of a backpack*

oh it has been a long day i think i'll set up camp too....*i put my gun back and get another tent out*