The arms are very thin, and (this doesn't matter, really) the wings are reaaaaaaaally short. Good job, though.

this is MY opinon but the tail should be longer

I agree with _noname. the tail should be longer, but other than that the pic is really great. the medallion was a nice touch. but i think you might have made the rider a little small.

thnks, but thas not a medallion. its ment to be the saddle. ya, i see a bunch of mistakes now that i look at it. thnks fer pointin all of em out guys!

without the mistakes, ur pic is pretty decent

better then decent

thnks

DONT TELL ME ANYTHING ABOUT THE BOOK!!!! im still readin it

I can tell you something about the book.....






....It's a book. XD

(>")>D --> ---> ---> ---> XD he.. he..

with words,and paper and...stuff.And do you know what is so amazing? It actually makes sense

i haven't read the book, and i should have by now

Nice. Love how you did it. tail could be a little longer, but whatever.

awesome

Eragon is pretty good but Eldest was just a freakin' huge disappointment.

I haven't read Eldest yet.If I don't read it soon I'm going to go mental and die wondering:what is the Eldest book like?

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that didnt make sence

I meant that if I don't read the Eldest book,I'm going to go crazy then die wondering what the book was like. Did that make more sense?

no i ment for the _c guy but thanks anyway

Eldest is good, but CP doesn't seem to realize what he puts in there. The two parts I recall are: 1. A house, 100 feet in the air, in a tree, strong enough to with stand MANY, MANY years of wear and tear AND hold a dragon. I understand the 'magic of elves', but that's a little hard for me to believe. 2. When Eragon stares at a certain naked elf....

i don remembr a naked elf but the tree thng, its fantasy. anything can happen.

Oromis. It's in the chapter 'The Secret Life of Ants'. When their disrobing to bathe in the river, Eragon 'watches' Oromis and CP describes him. It's not TOO revealing, but it wasn't necessary. But I usually rave on about books...so ignore me....

BLA BLA BLA BLA *covers ears* im not listning! im not listing!

yeah, i havent read the book yet either. dont spoil it!

How is saying that a perverted dragon rider watches as an old elf disrobes spoiling the book? lemme tell ya, that's NOT the most exciting part...

i know it isnt, but i would like to see what happens for myself, whether or not it is exciting.

*mumbles* fine....I STILL don't see how it spoiling the book....

especially creepy how Eragon finds it 'amusing' while he watches Oromis.

Mmhmm. At least SOMEONE agrees with me that it was weird....and ya know what else is creepy? 'His body seemed almost freakish to Eragon, compared to the men he was used to seeing in Carvahall....'. That disturbes me....
And have you noticed that Eragon cries a bit TOO much?

Hay! The picture is cool!

quit talking about the book i haven't read that part yet, the picture is cool too!

Well then don't read what we wrote.

the drawing is great and i have read both of the books and am currently w8ting for the third! thir awsome! although it seems evrybody is talking about the books, not the drawings, lol... !,,!.(-.-).!,,! rock on, dudes!

you're a bit wierd

A good pictur all in all. A bit out of proportion but none the less very good.

I have read the books too and this picture is veary accurate.

*looks through books* grr i read eragon but i cant find eldest... anyone want to lend me one? *keeps on searching*

Miremel: Actually, compared to the cover of 'Eragon', this picture is much different! But, personally, I like Delbin and Makla's versions better....

its pretty good. it could use some fixing up but not bad. earagon is a good book but eldest is better

I like it. It's a good drawing because you put soul into it and that's what makes a good drawing. I can find no fault.

is there something on the back of the dragon?

*sigh* it's Eragon.

ooo i c, i should really read the book, is it good?

YES! YES! YES! YES!

i dont think i ever even heard of this book it sounds pretty cool though

k, i'll read it:)

you haven't heard of Eragon? i have seen it in stores, but never thought to pick it up. i need to do that over spring break

u havent had spring brake yet?

Some schools start....this coming week, yes?

yes. since i live in new york, it remains a bit colder than the south, west, and the great plains, where it usually warms up before the northeast does. plus, easter and passover occur during this time, so they hold off on the break.

hey is the book good and im baaaaaaack*imagine freaky music*

oh joy....

whats it like in new york?

well, what do you want to know about life in new york?

i don't know is it like really busy like everywhere u go, is there like cool things happening all the time? cause where i live it's pretty boring

it depends on where in NY you live... i live on Long island, and it gets busier every year because of construction i go into the city (NYC) sometimes and it is very busy, day and night, but its also very fun. there is so many things to do, you need a lifetime to do them all, and to experience every little thing that goes on. during the summer, there are lots of street fairs where a whole street for blocks and blocks is cut off from traffic and people put up kiosks of many items and food to buy. there are many museums to check out; my 2 favorites are the museum of science and natural history and the metropolitan museum of art. there are restaurants and shops galore; they are all located in different parts of the city(like little italy and chinatown), and have all sorts of stuff from other countries and other hard to find novelties. of course, there are the many broadway plays to see. so far i have seen 42nd street, the lion king, wicked, mama mia, cats, phantom of the opera, and peter pan. i love going into the city during christmas time. i love to head over to rockefeller center and seeing the tree (its gorgeous! ), and just soaking in the holiday spirit! of course, there are alot of tourists from the us, and around the world. i have seen people from all over europe, asia, australia, etc. i even found some chinese currency on the ground this past season. this is just the tip of the iceburg; i cant explain the experiences well in words, because the experience speaks for itself.

Ah, you guys get the tourism almost, or just as, bad as us in Florida! With all the crap that goes on around here, there's always people from around the world. But in the Wintertime....oh, don't even get me started. All the people from up North trying to escape the cold....I have to take backraods and neighborhood streets just to get to school! And, considering my school a striaght, 30 minute ride from my house, backraods and neighborhood streets are pretty wierd....

well, what did you expect from the most famous city in the world? florida, on the otherhand, is tropical, so people everywhere want to soak up some rays on the beaches. plus, it has so many other attractions, like disney and bush gardens. the only reason i would go to florida is to ride the coasters at the theme parks! LOVE THEM COASTERS! *starts to laugh insanely* COASTERS COASTERS COASTERS!......

When (and if) I get to go on holiday,I think I'll go to the Maldives where the sea is 30° and the beaches are white..........

COASTERS COASTERS COASTERS!... BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! COASTERS!!!!!!!!

scary but wayyyyy fun..

LOVE 'EM! COASTERS COASTERS COASTERS COASTERS..............!!!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *runs over to a 700 foot coaster* *gets on and rides it* YEAH! LOOPS AND CORKSCREWS AND BARREL ROLLS AND 90 DEGREE DROPS AND SPEEDS SURPASSING 200 MPH AND..........COASTERS COASTERS COASTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok then

*a bolt of lightning hits her* wo, i needed that. i sometimes over react when it comes to coasters. *falls to the ground*

*looks down at E.D*are you ok

*suround E.d. and bring out equiptment* one... two... three.... clear ZAP!!!! *put bandade where they zaped* that was fun never did that before... oh and heres your bill... 700,000. have a nice day! *gose on rolar coster and rides it* YEEEEHAAAAAWWWWW

do u ppl think that canada is really cold cause where i live it did not snow once this winter and i was really angry

*sits up* yo, doc, that was REALLY uncalled for, so im NOT paying that rediculous bill! i was FINE before you showed up! *looks at coaster the doctor's on* COASTER, YIPEE! *takes a deep breath* dont over react, dont over react, DONT over react....
i think most of canada is cold, not all of it. i think the reason it might not have snowed where you are is due to a strange weather pattern; even we in the northeast us had a very mild winter, even though we did see some snow fall.
*whispers under breath* coasters, coasters, coasters.....

what is it with u a coasters, i hate roller coasters , well maybe cause if only ever been on 1

We can fix that problem *grins as he pulls out a really long needle* this wil hut alot *grins evily* and so will the bill

*gets out claws and looks towards the docters*this will hurt alot to if you dont shutup

*hisses and hides behind Akira* don't like doctors....they have sedative needles...

*looks at doctor with anger* GET AWAY FROM ME! *whips doctor with tail and he goes flying* I DO NOT, i repeat DO NOT HAVE A PROBLEM! i just LOOOVVVE roller coasters! YOU COME NEAR ME AGAIN AND I'LL MAKE SURE YOU DONT SEE ANOTHER PATIENT AGAIN!

*doctor calls for nurses and they come out of a portal with long neddles* hurry they all need help stat! *surround all of them and hold Blackhawk down ready to give him a very painful shot*

*shakes* neeeedles.......they are my biggest fear.....needles are the very reason I hate wasps: wasps have needles on their butts. *torches nurses and grabs Blackhawk, flying away with her*

*chases aiolos with some needles* IM BAK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i dont lik da pic.

ewww needles

ALL RIGHT, THAT'S IT! *charges toward doctor and nurses* GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! *instead of fire coming out of mouth, a blast of ice does* *they all are encased in ice* uhhhhh, COOL!? *punches ice and it cracks along with doctor and nurses* *then burns remains* *turns attention to minski and aiolos* *flies towards them and breaks needles with tail* prepare to be defeated! *tackles minski to ground* you hurt my friends, and you will have to hear from ME! *gets off of her and flies over to aiolos and blackhawk to see if they are okay.

*notices minski on the ground and walks over to her*you know your not the only one who has needles but the differnce is this is a liquid i just made up and i have been looking for someone to test it and you tried to hurt a friend sooooooooo *turns to E.D*can i pleeeeeease i really want to see what the ptien does i promise 100%that it wont kill or do any permanant damage pleease

*howls loudly and hides behind a rock* as bad as nastys,doctors.

go ahead!

yay this is gonna be fun*pulls needle out of bag which is full of a strange shimmering blue liquid and takes protective cap of the tip*now hold still minski or it could be dangerous.........................or at least more dangerous

I LOVE THE BOOK ERAGON AND THE OTHER ! ELDEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...WEW LIKE THE PICK!

love the pic!!! gotta say u did a gr8 job read both books and i loved them!!!

*watches Akira very closely waiting for something really cool to happen* i wonder wat it does? *starts swinging tail wildly*

ooooh What does it do exactly,Akira?

Your pictures cool. Ive read the books about a hundred times, i couldnt put em down

*runs around in cyrcles*

oohh that sounds fun... *runs round in circles* im dizzy...

i have no idea lets find out*injects the liquid into minskis left arm and then waits to see what happens*come on you stupid liquid how long does it take to have affect *waits another few minutes then loses patience*oh that is it im finding out what ive put in this potien then ill know what it does and why its taking so long*takes out a book and a small sample of the liquid and beghins cahnting some words*right apparently i put in ten parts masintez 2 parts hesgetium and maksez and fuinetra and a lot of of this blue powder called maakrientr............um oh crud*flys over to minski and quickly blinbdfolds her and sits her in a chair facing away from everyone*right if she takes of that blindfold do not make eye contact with her no matter what ok its a matter of life and death and a lot of embarresment

*starts to do back flips*

*follows noname and does some flips* WEEEEEEE! this reminds me of..... ROLLER COASTERS!!!!!! *chants something and a coaster appears before them* LAST ONE ON IS A ROTTEN SPHINX!!!! *gets on* coasters...COASTERS!!!!!

*jumps onto the roller coaster* yaaaay I've never been on one of these before!

it's an ULTIMATE COASTER!!!! *coaster starts to go at an excess of 300 miles per hour (i don't know the damn conversion to kilometers... damn US GOV'T!!!!!!!) anyway...... OH YEAY, BABY! OH YEAH! coasters COASTERS COASTERS COASTERS COASTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i just read da part were Eragon looks at the nakid elf and he thinks its....AMUSING?

XD Pervert...not you, Eragon...I hope he gets eaten by an Urgal in Empire. And Saphira laughs...and runs off with Th-....ehn, another dragon...

Eragon is like my all-time favorite book! I'm so glad someone finally made a good picture of Saphira, I love the wyverns and the European dragons better than the Chinese ones. This is the way I always envisioned Saphira. I love it!!

HEY EVERYONE you know Murtagh ....... well he got kidnapped

....what? He got half-killed, was striped of his clothes then dragged into a bloody tunnel....