the body structure is very good the hooves could use some work.... perhaps if you rounded the tips off a little it would make them match the wonderfulness of the rest of the dragon horse

oh, i made them piopnted on purpose so they would be a bit more like claws and give some traction.

THe emotion and pose in this picture is very good. It's rather fuzzy though, and looks like it could you some cleaning up. I like the tail though!

thank you

The only problem I see is about horse's legs, you should try to improve it... Maybe you could try to recopy a horse photography, I personally really like to recopy bird pictures, and I think it helps improving on anatomy

Hmm, right again acylius! Gawd I need to get back in my critiquing groove! I'm losing it here!

okay, just a random question... but how did acylius become rana's apprentice?

Because I'd always critique pictures and then Acylius would come in and say that he agreed with my critiquing and then make one or two extra comments, so I then dubbed him my critiquing apprentice, and that's how it started. *smiles at acylius*