The coloring on the wing is very nice.

i like pose and the feeling that comes off of the picture is very nice as well over all good job

thank you very much! i know the picture is a bit fuzzy, but i actually have small yellow lines coming off the blank spot in front of his face, to make it look like rays of light.

The coloring and shading are very good on this picture, and I really like the emotion combined with the line of movement. However, it looks like there could be some anatomy work needed throughout, like the front leg, the need for at least a hint of a back leg, and the wings are a tiny bit over-large.

You have been at work nayru with all this art !Good job with pic

oh, i just gathered artwork from my whole life, that hadnt been lost and was good enough to post. @rana: if you think about it, dragon wings must be very large in order to lifet them, so i dont think they are too big, but rather too small.

For the first time I don't agree Rana's criticism Wing over-large? I dont' think so, proportion looks good to me... But wing's arm could be more muscular and I think the head is too small reporting to the body. But on the whole I think this is a good picture

My apprentice speaks out! XD Anyway, I never claim to absolutely correct in any of my critiquing, I only point out what, in MY OPINION would make for a more pleasing picture. That is all. Perhaps you're right and I'm wrong this time. I'm not above admitting that.

Apprentice?? *the apprentice throws some cream pie to Rana and runs away, laughting insanely* Muhahaheheniehehe!

*licks cream pie off face and noms it happily* Of course you're my apprentice. I've always called you my apprentice! Haven't you noticed? Anyway, You'z getting to the point now where you really ought to become a journeyman, but I like you too much to let you free. *snuggles*

lol, thank you aqcylius, for sticking with me and not saying the wing is too large!! *hugs acilius as well*

It's ACYLIUS! Not aqcylius or acilius. XDD

*imagines himself locked in a dark jail, chained to the wall by the evil Rana saying: You're mine, you're under my power, you'll never be free again Muhahahaha!* Noooooooooo!!!

What? No! It's not like that at all! It's more like...you tag along with me on all my adventures because I'm so much fun to be with! *smiles* I'd never lock you up in prison! Sheesh, then I wouldn't be able to enjoy your funnyness. You'd go all dark and blank or angry in just a few days. that's no fun at all!

Yeah!! *huggles Rana and Nayru and Clue*

wheres clue?

in his shoes...

That is true I am in my shoes.

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They're cool shoes too. Black and white checkered high-top Vans. ;D

.... oooookaaaayy......

http://cn1.kaboodle.com/hi/img/2/0/0/94/7/AAAAAjdZgm8AAAAAAJR5yQ.jpg See? (: (Sorry I'm a shoe fanatic xD)

those are cute!

Aren't they? Shoes are my main weakness. The only reason I got a job.

i usually just get the cheapest in the store. i dont over care about the appearance as long as they feel comfy. i had one style that fit the shape of my foot for my entire life, but they discontinued it....

I usually get shoes that cost around $60. Vans are definitely my favorite brand of shoes. <33

Well i get mine around 80-90 somewhere in that area XD

I think 90's a bit much. xD I love shoes but I love money too. Haha.

mine i think are between 15-20 bucks, and i keep them until they completely fall apart

Ha, I get a new pair once the ones I'm wearing become dirty.

mine get dirty in a week! how can you spend so much money on shoes? i usually have total of two pairs at a time: flip-flops and tennis-shoes

Im like clue i have to get ma shoes mostly the tob brand stuff lol

you guys are lucky to have so much money. @firedrake: do you want to join the rp on the other pic? we just started so you can easily join

I love shoes so much. Its so pathetic that I even have a pair of heels because I thought they were really cute. You can only imagine the look the lady gave me when I went to buy them. xD

if you are a guy, why would you buy heels? .... are you gay?

Well yeah i will join hold on brb lol

Haha, yeah I am gay. Not I like I wear heels everyday though. I only have one pair and I only wore them once or twice in my room. xD

The only thing I really care about shoes is that I always have a pair of Earth Shoe sandals. Gawd those things are comfy! ^-^

i like those shoes too, but i rather have heels as well but in boot form lets ee... looks around room i have like a pair of tennis shoes, flip flops, and like 3 pairs of boots but only two of them are wearable outside since the one pair is for the barn lol i like the heeled ones best, but i can settle with the leather work boots with the steel toe in them they are compfy

Boots are cool, but unfortunately the kind I like just aren't very practical...at least not for a normal public life. If one were to be a ranger or a rogue adventurer they'd be perfect A curse upon all normality

*joins rana in the cursing of normality* i would probably wear them anyway.....

lol. You know, I just wish I could get away with wearing Rana's costume in public. That would be so awesome!

OK, Nayru. I said I'd look at your work, and it's good. This, hands-down, is the best. The color scheme and the detail on the scales adds to the overall look. Good work.

why thank you. i personally like the webs of the wing the best on this picture.