wow! datz GR8 Delbin! da hedz sew detaled an sew r da wingz! itz EXCELLINT!!! aldoh, U KNO IT WUDE BE BETTA IV IT WAZENT ON LINID PAPA!!! silee....heh, bu itz GR8 udda den dat! lukz lik evareebodee haz got a pic in now!

cept me. I hope mine gets here

yah...hope sew....

that would be cool, i guess. a math assignment?

wat? math assignment?/

wow! it actully went thru!? y didn anybod tell me!? o well. ya. this was supposed ta be a doodle but like maklas, they cme out bettr. if ya look carefully, yu cn see its on the bak of my math homewerk. hehe. don werry, i didn get in truble. he dosnt care. i do hve a bettr dragon. ill try 2 get it in as soon as possible.

o n plus i didn hve any wite papr with me. oops. the nxt dragon im sendin in will be the same. i jus cnt tell if ther gonna be good er not!

i no i cnt shut up but pleese tell me wha needs 2 be improved! i don care wha it is! n don say thers nothin rong cuz i no ther is! i alredy spotted 1 aftr i did it! i jus didn wanna ruin it. the bak wings 2 long. its so much longr than the front wing. so pleese tell me anythin else yu see rong! specialy yu makla! yer awsome at drawin!

Well, the horns are a little short (for my taste) and perhaps you could put more detail where the wings meet the body, but other than that its fine.

It needs a sorta lump for a shoulder blade, but the neck is really good, and everything is soooo much incredibly better than what I could ever do!!! *announce myself "No.1 fan, yay!!!!!!!!!* Great job!!!!!

thnks guys. ya the horns r a lil short. wen i 1st strted drawin these, they werent xactly dragons. they were like 1/2 dino 1/2 dragon. the hed was sortuf the same, but then i stoped tha n did this. n it dos need a sholder blade. i see tha now. talus, im jus confused on 1 thng yu said. wha do yu meen more deetail were the wings meet the body? jus 2 cleer up wha yu meen so i can fix it.

omg! i jus reelized tha was yu! i got yer email rite after i red yer thng! hey guys! this is a friend of mine, Tootsie.

lol. Can you get me a hat with no. 1 fan on it? I sure would wear it... u should see the dragon i ATTEMPTED to draw for Trisha... I soooo am better at drawing elves, and still, they stink. I think.

ther bettr than wha i can do. i cant draw human like creatures. hehe.

hmmmmm....improvementz, huh? wel....der iz sumptin i don lik bout da teeth....dey luke a lil 2 dul.....an perhapz an armorid underbellee wude be nice.....bu datz al! o, an hullo Tootsie! nice 2 metcha!

thnks sundance. i cudve fxed the teeth but i was fraid tha it wud be ruined. i hve gottn bettr at em. n ill see how it looks with an armord belly. if it comes out good, ill try 2 send it in. thnks again.

do you just put the picture into the email to send it in?

Delbin: I meant what Tootsie said, that there should be some muscle tendon holding the wing to the body. Tootsie: Hi! Aiolos: Yep, thats what I do.

yur welcum Delbin!

talus, thnks. it was jus uncleer wha yu sed.

okay, the teeth are too aligned and dull. the wing membrane should connect to the dragons side not its back. its shoulder is stuck out too far. and the eye seems to be bulging out of it's socket. there, i gave you some constructive critisizem. you don't have to take any of it seriously

thnks makla!

hmmmm....

grahgnaho... i find it much harder to critisize my friends art...

pleese do makla. wha yu said bfer didn offnd me if thas wha yer fraid of. i no it is but pleese do.

Have u heard of dr. drake?

yup.

he's awsome. well, he would be if he was a real person, not just some pen name. i read a story by Stephen King called The Dark Half and in that one a writer's pen name comes to life and tries to kill him! it's more interesting then it sounds

I reckon the dragons are true but i dont think that there is really is a person called Dr Drake. If u read the small print.I totally believe in dragons.

me 2.

I dont know y people dont.

Because they're idiots. They believe in the big bang. And moles. How many people have actually SEEN a mole.

I belive in dragons. I actually LIVE in a dragon valley.

me 2. n mole is a unit of mesurment. its used fer a veeeeeery hi #. ferget how hi, but its hi. they use it fer countin atoms n stuff.

No, that's a mol. I am talking about moles. as in the blind things in the ground.

me. I have them pop out of the ground all the time, at which point I pick them up and put them back in their holes. and a mole is used for measuring units of atoms. so, 8 mole could be in 20 grams of copper, but 8 in 10 grams of lead

Anyone that matters? And a MOL is used for measurings of atoms. A mole lives underground and is scared away by empty wine bottles.

THATS THE ABBREVIATION! *throws a mike at Silentiea*

dodges, then trows gatorade at Malchios.

*snatches it out of air, chugs it down, then tosses bottle at you*

*dodges again, but this time throws generic disgusting energy drink*

*makes Sundance drinjk it*

i'm looking in my AP Bio book right now and it says MOLE! it is MOLE, used for measuring atoms. heck, i'm looking at both my AP Bio books and they BOTH say MOLE!!

Well, my non-AP phy sci book last year and my geologist of a phys sci teacher said it was mol.

hes rite. its the abreeviation. they jus speel it like tha cuz its eesir. don ask me y, but scientists do.

All the same, no one has seen any of those moles any more than anyone has seen an ounce. They may have seen a mole of something, but never just a mole.

AP is the top science class, if it says mole then it's mole!

Still, no one has ever seen one of those moles, or any other.

Can anyone tell me the point of this argument?

It is proving that people believe in moles even though they never see them, and so they should believe in dragons too.

it's bloody stupid, that's what it is.

again, I agree with Makla.

Yeah, well, an argument for argument's sake, then.

why would you...? oh never mind, it'll just set off another pointless argument. we seem to have a lot of those

Debate is fun for me, that's why.

Back to the pic... I that fire coming out of his mouth? I looks more like honey surrounded by bees.

no. its acid.

oh *cocks head* now I see it!!

ya i no. its weerd cuz its sidewys but i put it on my blog strait so its eesr 2 see. my blog is www.delbinsdragons.blogspot.com i cnt remebr if yer ther er not. i shud but i dont sorry.

You talkin to me?

You talkin to me?

You talkin to me?

yu n anybod hoos reedin.

it does look better in the other position

I only sent that once- I promise.

its kinda weerd how the positon makes it look dif. yu evr wundrd bout tha?

It's not jjust the position, this one you can see the work on the other side, the other one you can't, so maybe it's quality.

no. its a diff scan than this 1. i altrd this 1 a bit so thas y its a bit eesir 2 see. if ya look thru the wings on the othr 1, yu can see it.

O.O can you say TALENT!?!? this is awesome!!

*parrot voice* rawk! talent! rawk! gimmie a cracker!

*gives Makla a big, slightly moldy cracker*

wha was tha bout? o wait nevrmind. iget it.

*rams cracker down Silentiea's throat* i'm not in the mood dammit!

yer not kiddin.

But you asked for one... That and Aeuea don't have throats...

thats a scribble?

whas a scribble?

dont know... lov da drawing! but its needs back legs!!!

you said it was a scribble.

WOW!!! ITZ AMAZING!!! Iluv the smooth texture!!!!! 100% 5 *

its cool but lindworms don't have big enough wings to fly....

. . .Pretty good, but why is he like hacking up a loogie? Is he a mucus dragon? HA HA HA ha. . .Whoo. . .Stop me before I hurt myself! But really, it's cool! And I won't criticize your use of LINED paper, for I do that ALL the time. I'd be a hyprocite. *looks at Navi* *grabs flyswatter* If you say "Hey listen" even once. . .

its acid. it was my 1st time tryin it. thas y it looks weerd.

so if i don't stop you will you laugh yourself to death? nah, of course not, we're not that lucky

lindworms dont have wings so if it did then it would be a amphithere. and rekki it could be a dragon that spits acid.

it looks more like a bull than a dragon and bsids the wings shoud have short claws not long claws

I think it is a really good Lindorm, when I looked at this book of dragons the picture didn't have wings of breath fire, but this picture is better than that picture in the book.