Pretty good! I think you need to work on your skill a bit.

I like the markings! ^^

you need to look at proportion.

i like the wings, there a pretty blue color!!!!

needs work but its good

looks really cool ^^

Aww this is cute. X3 But try to draw on something other than lined paper; it really takes away from the quality. ;.;

I like the blue color, but it definitely needs work! Keep practicing!!

needs work very much and could be better but ok

Ooo! What's the book about? And how many pages is it so far?

I just started the book; it's only like 15 pages, but I really hoped to get it published. Have u read eragon? It's similar to that; There's blood shed, evil empires, and creepy necromancers! Necromancers ROCK! * to Aiolos * I know, I really ruined it with the linned paper, but I never really thought of putting it on here.

hello everybody... did i miss out on something?

@blue scales: It's kinda supposed to be @Aiolos, and I think pretty much everybods has either read Eragon, or seen the movie.

Yeah.... I kinda figured that out when I reread my comment. Duh!

Dragonness: I never put an @ sign when I'm talking to someone. Just their name and a colon. C: The Eragon movie makes my eyes bleed...I waited almost two years for that damn movie to come out (I visited Shurty basically everday for updates), and when I saw it, I literally cried it was so horrible. I even went to the freakin midnight showing I was such a fan! ._.

*murders the movie* DURN YOU FOR BEING HORRIBLE!!!!!!

i know it was so disaponting they tried to fit too much in to too little and distroyed the plot ANG the got rid of sonlinbon(i speel it wrong) the werrcat also they had a really good cast (murtag and Eragon so hot!!) the only good part was when sapfera(sorry adout mt spelling) being born!!!! it did NOT i repeat NOOOOT live up to the book and if you haven't sean it DON"T!!!!!!!!!

Since the movie, the book has really started to annoy me. It's. flipping. EVERYWHERE. And Solembum is my favorite character (BESIDES MURTY OF COURSE <33333). Saphira looks horrible. Eragon DIDN'T GET MAIMED (best part of the book, yo). Angela is a slut. Brom is too young. Murty didn't get a big enough part. Galbatorix is excruciatingly monotonous. The Ra'zac are BUG MEN. Garrow had like five lines. They left out Hadarac. ARYA IS BLONDE AND LIKES ERAGON EW. They showed Shruikan. Durza is...not Durza...And I could go on forever so I'm going to stop.

maybe you should, cuz there were so many tigns wrong with the movie, you could get righ namong them all!!!

god the movie was so shit, i want to kill it. mutagh was shit, he was a crap actor, he wasn't right for the part. hahaha. AND THERE WERE LIKE 400000 ra'zac aswell!

MURTAGH WAS THE ONLY GOOD PART YOU FOOL. HE BURNED MY TV HE WAS SO GOOD LOOKING. AHHHHLSRJGNSDFM. -implodes-

MURTAGH IS HOOOOOOOOOTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!

his accent was shit, and he didnt fit in with the movie, he made me laugh how SHIT! he was

HAHAHA I feel like one of those annoying little fangirls. But that's fine cause he's like the only thing I fawn over. (AND WAKA~) xD;

HE IS SOOO HOTT!!! like, (...) hot!!

doesnt make him a good actor m'dear

How could you tell he was a bad actor? He didn't have a big enough part to judge on...! xD

XD, but seriously, wath him, look past his face. you will see he's bullshitee

Nah I thought he was ok. Not as bad as Eragon. But maybe his face is distracting me too much... xD; But Murty had been my FAVORITE character since the very first time I read Eragon (2003, yo), so naturally I couldn't hate him; no matter how bad the portrayal was. xD

i think eragon was good, but the other characters (minus murtagh) could ahev been a whole lot better...

Ehh, most of them were well enough actors...they just weren't right for the part. Murty fit though <3

eragon and murtagh were the wort for me. i liked brom, even ythough he wasn't brom. i liked durza, even though he wasn't durza. saphira looked liek a giant retarded bird

yeah...

YES I agree with you for most of that. Saphira was uuuuglyyy...I love her voice though. They got that almost perfect. Brom was a good actor, but he was not brom. Durza was...an ok actor...but he was hideous. Eragon was ugly too.

yeah. Roran (Eragons cuz) was kinda cute, though. i think Saphira needed to look more like a female. she reminded me of a boy dragon (NO OFFENSE!)

Roran was definitely better looking than Eragon. But he wasn't that great, either. D| Saphira didn't look like anything. Maybe she was a transvestite or something. LOL I KILL MYSELF. -shot-

HA HA HA!!! dont die...

she just shoud have looked like a dragon and not a reject from monopoly (wtf am i on aboiut here) well it may have been right for you, but like im english, so it wasn't saphira's voice for me...

i love the english accent... sorry...

so do i *high five*

Hey what's funny Mnementh, is I know a blonde kid named Josh from england. xD

;o wowerss, thats so cool, i bet he's not as blonde as me though |( whats his surname?

yeah! i know a blond girl, but shes from USA and she acts like a whore...

Hurr, most blondes act like whores (haha I just insulted myself...). His surname ends in Jones. I'm not saying the first part to protect his precious little identity. xD

ur blond? im dark brown...but my hair changes to light brown in the winter. it gets darker as it gets warmer outside, and vice versa.

i'm a mega whore, so suck on that. lawl. my name is joshua john ashard king and im blonde, i'm 5'6/7 got blue/green eyes, and really pale skin ooo and i bite my fingernails

T'cha, I'm blonde. And I don't like it. I really don't want to be classified as your cliche, skinny, slutty blonde idiot... ;.;

((I'm 5'3... D: ))

im 5'8, tnned skin (cuz i'm a Native American!) , dark orange eyes, (yes, DARK ORANGE), and THEY chnge from ornge to brown as it gets hotter, and so on.

blonde (maybe light brown now), pale, green/gold eyes...5'3...and I don't bite my nails. that's disgusting. xD; Uhm I do have OCD though, so I'm kinda annoying to some people ;D

ooooooooooo, im 12 mwuahhahaa, i will be 13 in july

im gullible, and my mom told me so, but i think its cuz i have a naturally big heart!

...I'll be 15 in november. xD And I'm gullible too. Haha, when I was waiting for a plane, my friend was like "hey nicole, gullible's written on the wall behind you." and I actually turned around to look. Of course, I'd been up since 4am...but still. I felt like hitting him afterwards xD;

tee hee hee! im turning 15 Monday, the 7th. *starts dancing* "HAPPY BIRFDAY TOO MEEEE!!!!"

awr gimmeh a description of what you look like and I'll draw you? c:

ummm....i am kinda tall, green scales with dark blue around each individual scale, long tail, and wolf paws that are dark blue fur. am i ugly?

i hate being the youngest

Ooh yeah I remember reading that in your profile... xD And no you are not ugly. ^^

im the youngest out of ALL my friends, but i m the most mature. naturally..

Really? I'm the third oldest in my entire school... ;P

wow. i feel like a kid, though everyone treats me like i'm 21, and i did get into a br t New year's Eve bc they though i was 21!

haha, really? No one thinks I'm older than I am because I'm too short...xD;

oh btw, when you guys can drive, im flying over, and you can drive me around, cos we can't drive till we're 17

That's only one more year than us. ^^

yeah, but it still would be fun ^_^

FUDGE MONKEYS!! my internet just shut off for a sec! dum computer..*smacks hard* my mom wont let me drive until i can buy my own car, so youll have to depend on Aiolos for that...

haha my car'll be ugly cause I want something Green

haha, my mum is excactly the same

well, im gonna buy my own car cuz im gonna be a freelance photographer when i get old enough! but, nature only..no people. they can take their own &*#@! pictures if they want... im gonna get somethin green too! I LOVE GREEN!

Nature photography = <3. I would so love to do that when I'm older. Perhaps even an aerial photographer, because I also want to own and fly my own plane....

cool beanies! the only time i flew was when i went to GA to visit my dad. it was scary, but FREAKIN BEUTIFUL! i left the ground just as the sun was setting behind pink and orange clouds...ahhh....so pretty.

I loooooove flying. I has SO much fun on my school's trip to Arizona two years ago, cause we had to go on four different planes. ^^

wow...i'd have gotten sick. flying in an airplane is...well, lets just say i get chlostrophobic REAL easily. i flew on one of those 737 flights..the SMALL ones...ugh.

All four of our planes were 737's. xD; So were the ones we took to Quebec this year. I'm kinda claustrophobic...not too bad though.

i have problems riding in n elevator! XD well, i gotta go. i'll talk to ya later, Aiolos! bye!

See ya! ^^

Oooh, I love those little Embraers! they're nice XD my aunt's claustro but not me... Greeeeeen rulz and I'll be 17 in July yayay! Happy early B-day Dspice!

hehe im gonna be 15 in november to aiolos ^^ for me its novemeber the second

November 6th for me. xD;

About the Eragon movie that ya'll were discussing up there, I think you forgot to mention one very important thing...THE DWARVES!!!!! THE FRIKKIN DWARVES DISSAPPEARED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And the whole fight at the mountain was WRONG!!!!!!! Well, I turned 14 not that long ago, so it'll be another year for my real birthday. BUT Jenu's offical birthday is June the 4th. (not cuz she came into existance in my head then, but June and Jenu have the same letters, and 4 letters each)

Yes I know the entire Farthen Dur battle was wrong...it was the worst part of the movie...

bad shadomonster!!!!!!! no dwarves no jeod no good urgals no bird razac and eragon was an idiot !!!!!!!!

NO DWARVES!! NO TWINS!!!! ALL THE PEOPLE IN THE MOUNTAIN WERE FRIKKIN HUMANS!!!!! GRAWR!!! *mighty evil dragon roar of doom!!!*

ya know if they plan on doing a movie of ELDEST.............

*plans to destory moviemakers before they even have a chance* *grabs blue print of evil movie makers head quarters* Ok, if we see even a hint of a sequel, here's what we'll do *lays out plan on blue print* OOC: I have no idea what the plan is, lol...

...........it wont work!!!!!!! heeheehee!!!!!!!!!! sequel: plan = ruin publicity!

No no no no! My least favorite thing about the movie is THEY TOOK OUT TOTALLY AWESOME SOLEMBUM!!!!!!! HOW DARE THEY?! DON'T THEY KNOW THAT HE AND MURTAGH (heart heart heart heart he's sooo super cool) ARE THE BEST THING ABOUT ERAGON?! GAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!! And they absolutely RUINED Angela! I'm going in the corner to pout now. *goes into corner and pouts*

Actually Fox was planning on doing Eldest. But speelers said he wasn't sure if he wanted to play eragon in it again so not much has been going on. And Jenu, there WERE dwarves in the movie. Right when murty and eragon get into the mountain, both ajihad and hrothgar greet them. some of hrothgars little body guard things are there too. They're only about three inches shorter than everyone else though. .w.