FIRST very good but is that a sun or a moon?

I think its great

its just my opinion, but the body looks a bit small for the wings. otherwise, good job. i think thats a moon

its ment to be the sun. there are light rays, but the scanner made em go reely faint. n the body might be small, its just the way it came out. thnks fer pointin tha out.

Great but it looks as if the wings are bent slightly the wrong way ....

i think if anything the wings are too small for the body.

theres wings r really to small. what is he doing

read the description....idiot...

how old are you people? like teenagers? my god i feel like 10 year olds are creating this crap!!!!! jesus get some art lessons before publicly showing this garbage. *disgusted with crap*

And you can draw better?Show us then,if you're so good. If not..hey Aiolos!here's some company for Joey!to anon:If you come back here with more of those foul insults,you'll be happy you stayed anonymous..

*hears Blackhawk* Company? For Joey? Nah, Joey's not worthy of company. And I don't think this ass is either. And I know why he put his name as 'anon': He thinks he's tough by saying bad stuff about amazing art, but is REALLY a wimp because he's afraid to show his name. Little snot rag...
Oh, and don't tell him to send art in. I becha he'll just steal someone's art and stick it up here.

u know u just could of said it was bad and why... u didnt have to insult us... and if u realy want to see bad art work anon then look at yours

hoos joey? is he tha anon guy?

Nahh,he was some little git who thought he was clever by insulting

hey, anon, keep those nasty comments to yourself, why dont ya? show us a piece of your work, and then we'll talk!!

Why shouldI

Because your an idiot, and should randomly combust.

i agree with Aiolos on that one

Yay for randomly combusting spammer freaks!

_Anon, keep your fat mouth shut. What can you do that makes you so superior? I'll bet you can do loads of stuff, or maybe nothing at all. Someone should slap some sense into you. Everyone is different or do I have to repeat that so that you're small, closed mind can comprehend?

guys you're just giving the little dick what it wants. just ignore it. let's talk about more interesting things; tapeworms for instance

Yesh, but it's fun to flame people on the internet! And tapeworms....not what I'd call interesting.

tapeworms...yeah, not my thing. my favorite...ancient Egypt, and supernatural things as well, but mostly Egypt

...Makla? Where did you go? You deleted your blog...and your DA account is blank, save for the deviations. Your not leaving are you? Please don't leave Makla! If you leave...and your not on DA....I can't talk to you anymore!!

what!? hes gone!?

I think he's very stressed out at the moment.Or he's on holiday.On DA he made a blank journal and he isn't answering any of his messages and on his profile the little emoticon said 'defeated'....Oh no..you don't think somethings happened to him or something?

dya konw what we shoukd do to ANON ????we should eat him/her and then they cant come back to bother any one ever again

I don't think anything happened to him....and I don't think he'd delete his blog out of stress or holiday. MAKLA!! WHERE BE YOU?!?

maybe something just happened to his computer...

But then how did he have the time to put up a blank journal, delete his profile and stuff on DA, delete his blog and make his Blogger profile inaccessable?

WAAAAH! Maybe he's leaving Forever!!!!! And If he isn't going to the DA,or his blog,or here....How are we gonna talk to him??Even on his profile,He deleted his Email addreses!!!! waaaahhhhh! Makla please don't go!

Jeez, how come when people kiss in these stupid romance movies they always seem to be eating each other's face off?....Oh, back to the Makla-Crisis. MAKLAA! RAWR!! COME BACK OR I'LL EAT YA!! Wait, we're not gonna start another one of those things when Sundance left, are we? Must not overreact, most not overreact...

..at least Sundance went to DA when she left...Makla isn't..anywhere we know of...*tries to calm down**fails and starts to panic* whatdowedo?whatdowedo? omg what if something's happened like the nassty men in white coats got him??? the nasssssttiees..

Men in white coats? must...eat....men in white coats..... THEYSTOLEMYFRIEND!! RAWR!!

aaaaah!! The Naaaasssstiesssss might find us too! *Starts to hyperventilate*Conspiricies!! the nassstiesss took Makla away and deleted any evidence of him and any forms of communication by deleting his blog and DA account!!!gaaaahh!they're coming for us next! I had a dream that they'd come to hunt us down and put us in an institute!!The nasssstiesss are gonna put any teenagers with imaginations like us and lock us up never to be heard of again!!!!!!

They couldn't get me! Half of them toofers in my mouth are pointed (really), I'd chew 'em to death!

yay we'll find Makla and bite the nassstiessss to death.....

*gives Blackhawk chocolate to make her hyper* GO GET 'EM!!

its just my opinion, but isnt blackhawk a bit hyper already, without chocolate? *looks at blackhawk who has just eaten chocolate**blackhawk starts bouncing off the walls, literally*

duck!!!! *knocks everyone onto floor as blackhawk bounces above heads*

*maniacal laugh* IT LIVES!!! *feeds Blackhawk more chocolate*

*blackhawk bounces out of sight* ok, where is she headed? if she doesnt control herself just a little bit, she is going to kill an innocent person before she kills a nastie! *everyone now chases after her as Aiolos keeps on with her maniacal laughing*

*bounces and leaps towards nowhere in particular and suddenly changes direction then runs into some woods* This way!!!!!!!!! mwahahahahahahahaha we're gonna get Makla back!!!! and no Nassstys gonna stop me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*flies after Blackhawk, still laughing maniacally*

*follows closely behind* just one question, what kind of chocolate did you feed noname, because it isnt any i have ever come across in my life.

*walks in and dives out of the way as blackhawk comes running at her and into the woods she then gets up and grabs Aiolos and E.D by the back of the neck and pulls them down*ok why is Blackhawk running into the woods and who on this earth gave her chocolate without me being here you know how much i love people getting hyper on chocolate*drops both of them then gets out a chocolate bar and throws it to blackhawk*this is gonna be fun

*eats chocolate and gets rapidly worse**sprouts a pair of silvery-blue wings* wOOt I can flyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!*loop-de-loops and dive-bombs a squirrel then suddenly dissapears in the trees*bwahahahahahaha....

*starts to chuckle herself* ok, we better find those nasties soon, or else the hyperness is going to wear off before blackhawk can attack them. *gets back up and sprints toward the forest exit to see if she can spot nasties* i see them, but no Makla! *sees blackhawk near edge of forest in the tree tops* GO GET THEM, BLACKHAWK!

*follows blackhawk but then turns around*i still need to know whats going on*turns round and watches blackhawk flying around*and how the hell did you sprout wings and fly

RAWR! wahey the power of chocolate rocks *swoops down and grabs a nasty by the leg* WHERE IS MAKLA? He ain't hard to miss,he's the half phoenix half dragon THAT YOU TOOK AWAY!

*flys over to blackhawk and looks at the nasty*please exscuse my friend here but by what she is saying you have taken makla who now that i think about it hasnt been here in quite a while so if you will still like to have the use of your legs or even be inside your body by the end of today i would tell us were he is because do you really think i would be able to stop her shes a large cat that can fly for crying out loud

*hisses and holds the nasty by the throat*

*looks in the distance* hey, blackhawk, i think i see a few nasties carring someone toward that awkward castle over there! *feeds blackhawk some super-charged chocolate*

You don't want to talk,human? fine.*extends her claws they pierce the nasty's ankle paraliysing him* I'll be back for you later.*takes off and flies towards the castle*Wait... Is that the castle they're holding noname in?

*looks around* well i'll be darned. man, we got here quickly.

yay let's save noname,Makla and save the world in time for tea lets go *speeds towards the castle*

be careful! it looks like he has more minions that i had thought!

*screeches to a halt* more minions? maybe we can sneak past them and kill Gorketh while they aren't looking..

ah, to tell you the truth, i dont think Gorketh is in that castle; there arent that many guards that i would expect to be protecting it.

If Gorketh is so powerful why would he need guards?

well, theyre not really "guards", more like followers. they just revere him so much, they would die for him. so, he has them doing his dirty work for him. thats why they would be "guarding" him.

*walks a little further forward but suddenly dives into some bushes and she comes back out she is holding a nasty by the scruff of the neck*is it just me or does it look like this thing was spying on us

*hiss* these guys are starting to remind me a lot of the Brotherhood... *paralyses the nasty by shooting her claws through his ankles then pins him to a tree with a long thorn* that should hold you. *hides in some bushes to survey the castle* Hey E.D where do you think they'd put noname?

i dont have a clue. i dont want to sound mean, but maybe we should take this conversation back to the original pic because it is just getting too confusing going back and forth

*write down* sorry guys but his time is up... *looks at nasty and closes eyes, digs into him and rips the soal out and takes his heart and silences it and looks at body* what did you do?... tourtue him? cuz if you did my cousion is not going to like this... *evaporates and all that is left is the roting body*

please can we just use ONE pic for this?

I can't comment anymore on the other pic,it won't let me

What? Why?

i would talk to tempest about that if i was you ive been having problems logging in

im not having any problems hey, tempest, could you help these guys out?

He's probably busy. I think he checks back every week or so...

wha was the death guy?

There don't seem to be any problem with this username. What I can do is reset the password to something else and try to make your account work from this point. Click on the "report this comment to the administrator" icon and tell me the desired password.

Wait! Tempest! Why your here, can you change the name on my 'sad eyes' pic to just 'Aiolos'?! PLEASE!!

Done. It was in your signature, along with your blog, so I wasn't sure if I had to just put your nick or your nick and your name. Your blog is also displayed in the file information, if this need to be removed, just ask.

No, you don't have to delete that. But, if it's possible, could you change the address? If so, thelink is: www.aiolosravi.deviantart.com
I'm sorry about the confusion ^^'

yu luv makin things difficult dont ya? lol.

*sarcasticly* Why yes Delbin, I do.

Death really creeps me out

same here, but I don't wanna live forever, I wanna die sometime, I wanna see what happens after death, and being old and crippled with no point in life is dull.

Well, I second that! But I meant that guy who used death as his user name.

(oh, half wit understands now!)

It's okay. Everybody gets thought blocks every now-and-then, even me! I love listening to the radio every time i get bored of everything else! (Man! I used every a lot!)