Nice concept, but I think there are some anatomic problems: where are the back legs? Maybe this dragon doesn't have backlegs at all, but it looks strange... Wings' arms are to strightly right, you should add muscles ans shadows, and I think those wings' arms are also a bit too long reporting the wings' fingers.

I agree with Acylius. Plus, the way you draw the wings flapping downward makes the chest area far to circle-ish. but cool pic, noetheless!

actually, i think it looks alright, just the shoulder area needs some TLC, otherwise, i think its a wonderful picture

thanks for the criticism @acylius: srry, i get lazy with details *shrugs* @rana: its a little late to fix things :\ but theres always next time @lom: thanks (TLC?)

I know, but it's something you have to be careful about.

TLC: tender loving care

How do you tender love and care for a picture?!?! O.o

lol, yeah that does sound kinda strange in hindsight, but, i guess i just meant that you need to spend a bit more time on the drawing, thats care, love drawing the pic enough to not be lazy, thats loving, and tender.... hmmmmm, i'll get back to u on that part

ummm...like don't press too hard or scribble everywhere. I guess that works....everything needs TLC! ^-^

*spreads vast amounts of TLC all across the galaxy* Wheeeee!!!!

No not the TLC!!!!!! *screams in over dramatised agony as Rana's TLC touches me* help I'm meltiiiiiinnnnnnnng *melts into black,red and blue puddle*

Awwws...!! *happy cheery face as Rana runs up and huggle glomps the silveera puddle* Much TLC love!!!! *pink floaty flowery background*

*is by this point gasping with laughter, but manages to get up and come poke squishey Silveera puddle* ohhh hee hee, u is a puddle silveera! *pushes silveera's floating eyeball around* can u see me now? 8D

That's mean lom!!! *continues showering Silveera with much love and happy pink floweryness as unicorns fall gracefully out of the sky* OOC: Not, of course, that I'M being mean to Silveera. I would...*cough* NEVER torture her or ANYTHING! *coughcough*

*pets what i hope is the remains of silveera's head* teehee!

*the floating eyeballs seem to glare at rana as if to say 'and this ISN'T torture'*

poor puddle Silveera, now what will u do? *suddenly realizes i cant find ur other eye* wait, its gotta be there somewhere! *pokes Silveera more, but gently* were ish ur other eye?

*my eye in the puddle 'looks' over at a neer by tree, where that god dambed stalked squirrel has my other eye, and is currently using it as a soccor ball*

cool! *goes and joines in the soccer game*

*continues dancing happily around Silveera puddle, being joined by pink unicorns and pink princesses and little fairies and many many flowers and rainbows* *happily ignores the glaring silveera eye*

*my puddle suddenly begins to steam, and the glaring eye takes on a redish hugh*

I need to go now, bye!!!

bye Rana *waves.....um, ripples XD*

*seeing the great distress that Silveera is in, Rana finally ceases the incessant pink and fairyness* *Using her water skillz, she forms the Silveera puddle into SIlveera's body, making her fully solid*